Reviews For A Rainy Afternoon

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Reviewer: LadyStiff (Signed)
Aug 12, 2013 01:43 PM

This was just so cute! I can't believe how well you write about children's behavior. Me being childless would be completely stumped. 

The absolute best of the whole thing was Lucius' involvement. You know how that man makes me weak at the knees and you described him so calm and beautifully. 

Love your work and you, but im guessing you already know that. 


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Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Aug 12, 2013 09:43 AM

I enjoy a story with children in it. It brings back memories and it makes the characters more real. Know everything about rainy days and cabin fever. I had played my share of Barbie goes or does this or that and Batman or Superman battles, all to keep the peace. One of my favourite pairings by the way. Lovely job. 


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Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Aug 11, 2013 07:48 PM

Very cute, what a wonderful addition to the challenge.

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Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Aug 11, 2013 10:23 AM

The entire time I was reading this I was thinking, "I wish I could read the 'prequel' of when they started to date and then I thought, 'I wish this would continue'. There was so much in such a short story and it almost BEGGED to be longer... at least by me!

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Reviewer: Ryl (Signed)
Aug 11, 2013 09:35 AM

What a delightful blended family! And Lucius at a tea party? Priceless!

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