Reviews For Nerola's Tale

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Reviewer: Hermionelovesharry07 (Signed)
Dec 08, 2013 03:06 PM

I loved this very much!!!!  I would love to how nea and ingo find the heart mates!!!   Please write more of the wonder family.

 

beautifully written!!!!    

 



Author's Response:

there are stories for all the sisters, and Ligt touch of a healer's hand is set in this world

thank you so much for the review

Chapter 28
Reviewer: Hermionelovesharry07 (Signed)
Dec 08, 2013 11:16 AM

Love the chapter and domnas and liberty don't have to wait!!!



Author's Response:

only until they get to the Temple.. glad you are enjoying it

Chapter 18
Reviewer: Hermionelovesharry07 (Signed)
Dec 07, 2013 10:44 PM

A fiting judgement, I think!

 

good chapter



Author's Response:

oh yes.. a very fitting punishment

Chapter 8
Reviewer: Hermionelovesharry07 (Signed)
Dec 07, 2013 07:21 PM

Ohhh to meet more family!



Author's Response:

he has a lot of family to meet... try explianing to Grandma when you've upset your wife :)

Chapter 3
Reviewer: Hermionelovesharry07 (Signed)
Dec 07, 2013 07:06 PM

Wonderful intense chapter.....shocking to see what has happened and to understand better why he is in prison.

 

 

He was in for a shock!!!,



Author's Response:

He's in for a lot of shocks.. mainly nice ones

Chapter 2
Reviewer: Hermionelovesharry07 (Signed)
Dec 07, 2013 06:32 PM

Like this one so far.  Like the start in the prison.  On to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

this one is supposed to be the first in a series... hopefully No. 2 will join it in 2014

Chapter 1
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Oct 15, 2012 06:32 PM

It took me almost an hour to finally finish. I started almost from the beginning again, to reaquaint myself with the story and characters. This was on my list of things I WANTED (not needed, for a change) to do on my last little vacation of the year (I go back to work tomorrow after five glorious days off).

But enough about me... ha! You already know how I feel about your writing. You already know how I feel about you as a person... a friend... a wonderful, giving, loving human being.

Thank you for sharing your talent and gifts with all of us, and for all that you do. Your words truly inspire me. I should go back and review each chapter (especially if I want the carrot this month!) but I really didn't want to interrupt the flow of the story by slipping in my little thoughts here and there. That's why I decided to read it right through and review at the end.

Again, thank you for this story. It was one of your best, in my opinion. In fact, so far, it's my favourite of yours!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. I had doubts about this one as all the 'action' was at the beginning... but I think it worked

 

and thank you so much for your kind personal words... it's been a tough year

Chapter 28
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 09:09 PM

I hope there are more stories about Nerola and her sisters and her brothers. Truly enjoyed this very original story.

Elena



Author's Response:

there are more stories in the planning stage and I have nearly finished one about a healer that live in that wold...

Chapter 28
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 08:54 PM

Happy ending, lovely story. I want more.

Elena



Author's Response:

thank you, there are more stories planed

Chapter 27
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 08:40 PM

I could picture the timid light of dawn barely caressing the sky, the dragons around the temple and then all the colours of the rainbow. Beautiful ceremony.

Elena



Author's Response:

thank you.. and that was exactly how i pictured it as well

Chapter 26
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 08:23 PM

The moment they all have waiting and prepared for is coming.

Elena



Author's Response:

yep, and i hope it doesn't disappoint

Chapter 25
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 08:04 PM

I have found a new man to dream about and his name is Thewlin :) A man's man. Do they even exist anymore?



Author's Response:

i hope they exist, it would be a sad world if the didn't

Chapter 24
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 07:20 PM

Talking without thinking or getting your facts straight can get you in deep trouble.

 



Author's Response:

oh yes, that is so true... and you never know just who somebody is and who they are related to either

Chapter 23
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 06:32 PM

Nice reunion. Hard to believe Thewlin thought so little of himself and now he is married to a godess and his family is royalty now.



Author's Response:

mmhhmm, Thewlin has come a long way...and his family are very well connected now.. amongst the highest in the land

Chapter 22
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 05:50 PM

Thewlin and his mother are very generous. Thewlin must be thinking he is dreaming. Is the Nerola's grandmother the one who chooses the sex of the children as well as the number of children for her subjects? 



Author's Response:

The Goddess doesn't chose for all of them, just interfer occasionally. And yes Thewlin must think it is all a dream

Chapter 21
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 12, 2012 04:53 PM

I wonder if this happines is going to be short lived

Elena



Author's Response:

only a few hundred thousand years or so

Chapter 20
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 11, 2012 06:59 PM

Right, I forgot about Libeth and Domnas. So, the attraction is mutual, it isn't one sided. Does it happen only to those the gods are in love with?

Elena



Author's Response:

The family KNOW who they are supposed to be with as soon as they meet them, but Domnas still has to court Libeth, and persuade her to accept his suit...

Chapter 19
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 11, 2012 06:00 PM

One happen event after the other.



Author's Response:

yep, and glad you are still enjoying

Chapter 18
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 11, 2012 05:45 PM

Nothing like a happy, uneventful birth and a surprise to make it better! :)

Elena



Author's Response:

yep, and now Thewlin has 2 sons, and a lot of boasting potential

Chapter 17
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 11, 2012 05:24 PM

At least these gods go through labour pains, how democratic of them! :)



Author's Response:

lol, yep. her human side shows, she should have stayed dragon and just laid an egg

Chapter 16
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 11, 2012 05:05 PM

What if Lisbeth doesn't correspond Domnas feelings? Is she at liberty to choose her partner? 

Elena



Author's Response:

If she didn't resiprocate his feelings she wouldn't hvae been his heart mate.. just a fancy and he would have known it...She is his Heart-mate, the one he was born to be with, just as Thewlin and Nerola were born for each other...

In this world arranged marriages were considered acceptable, so I honestly couldn't have answered the second question, certainly not if her brother had charge of her still

Chapter 15
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 11, 2012 04:48 PM

I love this world you have created! 

I wondered if Nerola really needs all this gold. Thewlin has come to grips with the fact that is married to a godess but why does Nerola and her family have to 'ignore' his wishes? I don't mean not having any luxury or gold and gems around but... what so much of it? Thewlin is a simple man, why not keep it simple for him. 

Don't get me wrong these gods are unlike any I've read before, wise, generous, just, cheerful and loving toward each other and their subjects. I guess gods can't grasp completely what it means to be mortal and without any powers. 

Elena



Author's Response:

Nerola doesn;t NEED the gold as such, it was that each piece held special memories....they had been made by her brother or given to her by close friends....much as a mother keeps the drawings and 'jewellery' her child makes from pasta.. it's not that it is gold but that it was crafted with love.

 

Thewlin will get used to the riches, he is now one of the wealthiest men around....

 

They aren't pure Gods, they are part human, the Goddess is training them for future life....but no, they have always had some sort of power. even political power

Chapter 14
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 11, 2012 04:27 AM

One chapter before going to work and the images I'm taking with me...well...Let's just say they aren't primary school appropriate. 

Wish our leaders in any type of setting were as wise and compassionate as these gods.

Elena



Author's Response:

thank you for yet another lovely review...

I think the Goddess gave them tough lives to make them more compassionate and understanding....

Chapter 13
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 10, 2012 07:15 PM

Nerola is making me proud. A true woman. Femine enough to have men pinning over her and strong enough to make those same men whimper in fear. Strength isn't about muscles or body size. Nerola and Thewlin are my favourite characters and I must tell you, I've had naughty thoughts about Thewlin, his body is just yummy! :)

Elena



Author's Response:

Yep, you got it.. she is a feminine power house, all softness and strength...

 

As for Thewlin, yes please.. tied firmly to my bed so I can explore every strong plane and interesting muscle....

Chapter 12
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 10, 2012 06:38 PM

These gods are nothing like the gods in Greek or Roman mythology. Spanking their children is such a human act! The first row wasn't as bad as I thought it might be. Being married to a godess is daunting enough, dealing with what it all means as far as living or trying to live a normal life is something else.

Elena



Author's Response:

I didn;t want the infighting of the Greco-roman pantheon, more of the co-operation from the celtic one or the loving understanding of the Norse one....and yes being married to a diety would be terrifying for any man

Chapter 11
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 10, 2012 04:55 PM

I'm impressed! The rituals, the myths, the story behind this ancient family and the story itself are just...wonderful. The weapons' ceremony was really beautiful! What a great story!

Elena 



Author's Response:

I do a lot of back stories, even |The Goddess and the Destroyer's first meeting is written somewhere, along with Ricardos's courting of Iris....

Chapter 10
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 10, 2012 04:20 PM

These gods behave like a normal family, in fact, more lovingly than most families. I don't know about feeling what the other person is feeling or being able to 'read' their minds. One may be unpleasantly surprised. So much love between Thewlin and Nerola!

Elena




Author's Response:

I wanted to make them as 'normal' as possible despite the fact that grandmother is a goddess... and mama a demi goddess

I think they can only read when it is very strong, or needed (If Nerola goes missing again)

Chapter 9
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 10, 2012 03:03 PM

Killing Morgan would not have been punishment enough. Living in misery is just perfect! And now what? Nerola is happy with Thewlin. Maybe the next of the story is about Cyanea.

Elena



Author's Response:

glad you approve...there is more of the story to tell and i hope you're not disappointed

Chapter 8
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 09, 2012 05:33 PM

So much happened in this chapter! Thewlin learned about the pain and sorrow Cyanea has gone through. I can only imagine what he feels after hearing Cyanea's story. I do hope Cyanea finds some happiness, even if it's not with a man.

Elena



Author's Response:

there is someone (or maybe more than one) who will love her unconditionally... and yes she had a tough time, now that Thewllin sees more clearly, she has someone who will love her as family, and a home that will always be hers

Chapter 7
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 09, 2012 05:06 PM

Cyanea deserves a good man. Not pity but, understanding.

Elena



Author's Response:

Cyanea will have her own story and her own happy ending, one with all she needs

Chapter 6
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 08, 2012 02:29 PM

I empathize with Thewlin. Falling in love with a Godess, part of a family like no other and exposed to practices he knows little about plus his own modest background. Most be overwhelming.



Author's Response:

I felt for Thewlin in this story.. he felt like a leaf tossed on the winds of fate... 'I've knocked up a woman and her grandmother just happens to be the Goddess who called our world into being,,, you couldn't hide deep enough

Chapter 5
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 08, 2012 02:09 PM

Nerola has scars and so does Thewlin. Small coincidence but it moved me. 

The natives in South America (I lived in Argentina for a few years) pour whatever they are about to drink first to the Earth (Pacha-Mama some call it) and then they drink. A really nice custom.

I'm falling in love with this story.

Elena



Author's Response:

i didn't notice that :)

i didn't know about the S. American offering but i have heard if it in Europe

 

glad you are enjoying

Chapter 4
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 08, 2012 01:23 PM

This is going to be so hard for Thewlin! Please tell me there is going to be a happy ending! What an interesting family!

Elena



Author's Response:

my muse only does happy endings... and if not I do put a warning, no warning here

Chapter 3
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 08, 2012 12:59 PM

My heart cried out when they found Nerola. What a beast! Thewlin and Nerola chose each other; he shouldn't be afraid of losing her. Holy crap! Nerola is the King's sister. I thought she was someone important but not 'that' important.

Elena



Author's Response:

Poor Nerola, she went through it a bit, so did Thewlin.. there will be more surprises in store.. and Thewlin had a very poor upbringing...

Chapter 2
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 08, 2012 12:07 PM

Absolutely marvellous! The moment I read the very first sentence I knew I'm going to enjoy this story. You have an amazing talent and I'm not talking about your first rate writing but the wonderful imagination you're giftend with which creates fascinating worlds as well as characters. 

Elena



Author's Response:

Thank you. This is one of a series of stories that have lived in my head for years!

Chapter 1
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Oct 04, 2012 04:15 PM

Beautiful, beautiful tale. I loved your unhurried pace. You took your time to develop lively characters and a vivid world around them. Their feelings are genuine and real. I could feel their emotions. Excellent. Thank you so much for such a wonderful journey.   



Author's Response:

thank you. Nerola and her sisters have lived in my imawgination for years, it was wonderful and fun to bring thm to life

Chapter 28
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Oct 03, 2012 07:07 PM

Beautiful, beautiful wedding. Loved it and very happy for all three couples. Yay!



Author's Response:

thank you .. I wasn't sure how much detail to go into, and it took some re-writing, but it worked in the end....

 

thanks for all the reviews you've left

Chapter 27
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Oct 03, 2012 07:05 PM

Oh-oh, it's going to be hard for Thewlin and Nerola's to be separated, even if it's just for the night.



Author's Response:

hence the guards and the orders... lol.. poor Thewlin, Nerola is his rock and shield in this new world and she's somewhere else...

Chapter 25
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Oct 01, 2012 08:45 PM

Ah, loved the gentle love scene at the end. It was perfect. 

 



Author's Response:

thank you, Thewlin and Nerola are  a couple of my favourite lovers

Chapter 24
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Oct 01, 2012 04:48 PM

Nice! Thewlin's family is going to have a new, better life from now on. :))



Author's Response:

Life is going to be a lot better for them all...

Chapter 23
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Oct 01, 2012 04:00 PM

Haha, excellent! Poor Thewlin. I hope he will get used to teasing eventually. :D



Author's Response:

I don't think the teasing will ever stop, in fact I think it will be particulaly bad when his own daughters grow up...not that I think any boy will get further than 'good morning' without at least one warning

Chapter 22
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 30, 2012 07:28 AM

Oh, wow. That was so good. Loved the Goddess. 



Author's Response:

If it doesn't sound stupid, I wanted her 'human' with a peronality.. so I am delighted it worked

Chapter 21
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 28, 2012 10:05 AM

Oh my, what a heartwarming chapter. You painted such a beautiful scene of their reunion. 



Author's Response:

It is one of my favourites, sometimes family can be helpful....

Chapter 20
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 28, 2012 09:45 AM

Oh my goodness, I only now noticed that you mentioned me. Thank you! You made me sniffle (I am so idiotically sentimental lately)

 

Love, love, love this chapter. I want you to know that I really enjoy reading this story. I love your style, the universe you created and most of all the calm, peaceful pace of the story. Thank you!

PS. Oh, and men in the story just fabulous. I absolutely love them *sigh* 



Author's Response:

You are welcome, and I am delighted that everything went well. The men are delicious.. I could eat one up :)

 

more waiting for you

Chapter 19
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 25, 2012 04:32 PM

Love the dragons :) I am sure that Moreth has lots of funny stories about Nerola. hehe

I love the festival idea. Yay! Thank you for the wonderful chapter.

I am sorry about you catching the cold. It's that season again. Hope you'll feel better soon.  



Author's Response:

thank you for the good wishes... I'm sleeping 6 hours up six hours etc and trying not to infect the rest of the household...

I think Moreth will have a lot of stories about Bud, just the sort of thing a husband needs to hear :)

Chapter 18
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 24, 2012 12:19 PM

Oh my goodness, twins! Beautiful chapter. I enjoyed it very much. :)



Author's Response:

unexpected twins, and it is possible to have twins of different gestations...and yep, one delighted and relieved papa

Chapter 17
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 21, 2012 06:33 PM

Excellent chapter! It reminded me about my own pregnancies. *sigh* Why do kids grow so fast? 



Author's Response:

tell me about it, my eldest is married... how on earth did that happen??

Chapter 16
Reviewer: SusanMarieR (Signed)
Sep 20, 2012 10:42 PM
You describe your world very well. thank you for drawing me into it. :)

Author's Response:

and thank you for taking the journey.. there is a lot more to come yet

Chapter 5
Reviewer: SusanMarieR (Signed)
Sep 20, 2012 03:08 PM
Thank you for this. I like this one as well. I wish I had more time to devote to it, but it has a different sort of feel, and if I continue to read it I'm afraid I may start to skip a bit just to find out what happens. I like the dragons people and the feel of magic through out with so much realism. however of course I wasn't to thrilled with the gore, but it appears to be a plot point or something to help move it along, and won't be in their too much. thank you and the subject is mathematics.

Author's Response:

the gore in this chapter, and two more are there as plot points...

Glad you are enjoying them, and hope you enjoy the rest. No, Maths students wouldn't understand being late for class because of a story...

Chapter 4
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 20, 2012 08:05 AM

Oops, forgot the stars :)



Author's Response:

thank you

Chapter 15
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 20, 2012 06:25 AM

Ahh, poor Thewlin, it's so hard for him to express his love. And with all Nerola's brothers and sisters constantly keeping an eye on him. It's not easy. 

I am very happy for Libeth. yay!



Author's Response:

Thewlin hasn't had much experience of love... he'll learn though, he's about to be adored for the next few hundred years....

 

It is hard to court someone properly when everyone is looking over your shoulder...

Chapter 15
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 19, 2012 07:42 PM

Wonderful tale. I love the world you created and the dynamic inside the family and between the siblings. I think you managed to paint your characters masterfully. I wonder what else is in store fro them? 



Author's Response:

thank you, there is another tale set in this world on my own site, but it is unfinished.. |I'm trying to upload only finished ones here at the moment. Thewlin and Nerola have more adventures to go through, and more surprises for him

Chapter 14
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 19, 2012 10:06 AM

I am sorry that I didn't review each chapter, I just couldn't stop reading. I felt like a child with a favourite book. Alas, I had to return to the real world from your magical and wonderfully written one. *sigh* Love the story. It took my breath way, honestly.

I'll be back to read more tonight. :)



Author's Response:

RL should be banned.. especially when there's reading and writing to do. So pleased you like it

Chapter 8
Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Sep 19, 2012 10:01 AM

Oh my goodness, what a fascinating start. Very, very excited to read more. Yay!



Author's Response:

thank you, I'm so pleased that you liked it

Chapter 1
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 19, 2012 06:52 AM

Libeth reminds me sort of a female Draco... ha! Young, impressionable, and easily led astray by things in her past, but not beyond redemption.

Oh, and Thewlin... calm down about your wife's gifts and riches!



Author's Response:

yep, she is a bit, raised to a position of privilidge and thinking it makes her better than those around her...And you have to feel a little sorry for Thewlin, it would be a bit much for any man

Chapter 14
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 19, 2012 06:49 AM

I get so caught up in this story that I have to remind myself that it isn't a published book. Why isn't it a published book?



Author's Response:

LOL I'm seriously thinking about it....number one in the series first....

Chapter 13
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 19, 2012 06:45 AM

Nice long chapter. And in the beginning, I wanted to hug him again, feeling guilty that I wanted to thrash him the last chapter. HA!

 



Author's Response:

thank you, I'm never sure whether i want to murder him or hug him either.. he is just so much a man

Chapter 12
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 19, 2012 06:35 AM

Pride goeth before the fall. Thewlin has just been taught that lesson, and brought down a peg or two. I almost felt like hitting him upside the head. Good thing her family interceded, so I didn't have to.

Funny, he seemed he was only alright with it all when he found out the lands and properties were his as well as hers. Such a man.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, he's definitely a man!! and therefore capable of making most women want to slap him one....He'll make mistakes, and regret them but he'll never stop loving her

 

Chapter 11
Reviewer: SusanMarieR (Signed)
Sep 19, 2012 06:13 AM
Oh my goodness this is awesome. I can't believe it took me so long to start it. I'm not usually one to read originals when they aren't published but this really is great. I look forward to more, but i must get ready for work... booo I'm running a bit late, and the excuse of reading just won't cut it with my students. :) Thank you. I'll have to continue this sunday... if I can stand the wait, but I want to have time to read it, and not rush like I had to when I was about half way through this chapter and noted the time. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, and I have been late for work because of reading and writing as well... Glad the story has 'hooked' you.

The excuse of reading might work.. what do you teach?  I'm planning on updating every day and the story is finished

Chapter 1
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 15, 2012 12:10 PM

Well, well, thanks for the kind words. And this chapter was sexy, ah? And I have to say, Thewlin is quickly becoming one of my favourite heros.

 

 



Author's Response:

thank you, I am so glad you are enjoying this story.... and you have been amazing (But if Nerola ever givs him up.. Thewlin is MINE!!)

Chapter 10
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 13, 2012 05:02 PM

WOW!



Author's Response:

thank you, and yahhh did the bnanner  happy dance

Chapter 8
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 13, 2012 05:02 PM

Full of excitement, this one was. (I sound like Yoda!)



Author's Response:

I love Yoda... or should that be Yoda, I love.... Thanks for all the support

Chapter 7
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 13, 2012 05:01 PM

Great chemistry in this chapter. I felt the romance and section tension. Also, sort of a sad chapter.



Author's Response:

I wanted to show that the sisters have had tough lives, that everything just didn't 'go their way' because of who granma was...

Chapter 6
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 13, 2012 04:58 PM

Just decided. I also want a dragon.

Not a big deal, but you know you can post the banner in the summary, too, not just the notes, so it will appear on the page of 'most recent'. if you don't want, that's good.



Author's Response:

I tried and all I got was a long list of numbers. I will try again....

Chapter 5
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 13, 2012 04:56 PM

I want a 'heart-mate'.



Author's Response:

yes please as well.....

Chapter 4
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 09, 2012 06:15 AM

What a way to leave us! See, you need to post daily because I can't wait long!



Author's Response:

lol, I will post number 4 tomorrow, my time....

Chapter 3
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 09, 2012 06:12 AM

Loved it! Your descriptions and use of the 'language' (so to speak) are my favorite parts!



Author's Response:

thank you, gl;ad I captured the detail in a way you could get

Chapter 2
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Sep 07, 2012 04:27 AM

Entrancing, exciting and full of lugs historical style, LOVELY!

Thank you for sharing this.



Author's Response:

glad you are enjoying. The story is finished and will be updated regularly

Chapter 1
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Sep 06, 2012 01:00 PM

You truly are a master storyteller!



Author's Response:

thank you, coming from you that is a real compliment

Chapter 1
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