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Mother, educator, fan of the Harry Potter series and Lord of the Rings. Avid reader of mostly romantic novels but sometimes science fiction and political thrillers sneak in. Hate to cook but enjoy playing at 'handyman' around my condo. First language, spanish.


Music is very important in my life. Favourite spanish-speaking singer: Ricardo Arjona. One of his songs inspired my one and only fic. English-speaking singer? Too many to mention.


Disappointed with how the Harry Potter series ended, fandom helped me to get over it by exploring what if... and it has been a blast! Favourite Harry Potter characters? Hermione, Luna, Harry, Neville. Draco intrigues me. I have met wonderful, smart, funny and caring people in this vast universe that is fandom. One of my favourite Harry Potter fandom authors is here: AnneM.


I'm really happy there are so many types of fics to enjoy in TMB. First site I feel very much at home. For the first time I'm reading original stories (jamies_lady is one of my favourites) Good luck with the site!


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Reviews by eterna-romantica03
 
Summary:

When an elf named Herron claimed that Luna's mother offered him her protection over his cottage, woods, and treasure for the rest of his life, she felt obliged to carry out that duty in her mother's place, now that her mother was dead. Hermione Granger wasn't about to let her friend travel to the backwoods of the United States by herself, especially since she didn't trust this elf. She came to Louisiana with Luna, figuring they could quickly set up the enchantments and wards on the elf's property, keep it safe from all those who would try to steal it from him, and leave by the next morning.

Problems started to arise in the form of a tall, blond vampire sheriff named Eric Northman and a handsome, dark werewolf pack leader named Alcide Herveaux. These two supernatural creatures had a different tale to tell...they claimed the elf stole the enchanted woods, cottage and treasures from them, and they wanted them back, no matter what. (HARRY POTTER/SOUTHERN VAMPIRE MYSTERY CROSSOVER)


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A different take on the Grimm's Fairytale of "Snow White and Rose Red" featuring Hermione Granger and Luna Lovegood, as well as characters from 'Trueblood'.


Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter , Sookie Stackhouse
Genre: Fables / Fairytales , Fantasy , Humour, Romance, Vampires / Supernatural
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: The Rose of September
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 12119 Read Count: 384;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 15, 2012 Updated: May 15, 2012


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've heard of the series but only that and since you did such a good job with Ranger and Hermione I thought I should give this a try. Hermione must have been really distracted and worried because for a little while she kept calling the elf a man. 

The elf lied or maybe told half a truth, otherwise the wolf and vampire wouldn't care, right?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Luna is such a wonderful character, isn't she? She'd be this calm in the face of danger. I do love her. So what are these two men/werewolf/vampire men up to and why?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Luna wasted no time at all.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I knew Luna and Hermione would not stay. Are all crossover stories like this? The characters from each fandom can't stay together? Are there any fics out there where the characters start their own story? 

I enjoyed your story with Ranger very much! Left me wanting for more of it. 

I like this one too and might or not explore that other world. Have you read the books, watched the show?

Thanks again for a light and entertaining fic.

Elena

 
Summary:

All's fair in love and kisses...especially when it comes to 'first kisses'.

Hermione never told anyone about her first kiss, because instead of being a sweet memory, as it should have been, it all was too excruciating to endure. She kept it locked up in her heart for ten long years and even though she was joking about it now, there was no way she would reveal the painful truth to anyone.


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Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter
Genre: General, Humour, One-shots , Romance
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: The Rose of September
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6270 Read Count: 437;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 15, 2012 Updated: May 15, 2012


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Stories like this one leave me grining like an idiot and believe me it is a good thing. It was oh so sweet! Especially that last part, fluff and of the good kind. Thank you!

Elena

 
A Wish for You by AnneM Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Hermione Granger writes Muggle romance novels under a penname and they always feature the same two characters ... a plucky heroine named Hannah Smith and an evil Lord Lionel, the fifth Earl of Malford, who have a passing resemblence to herself and Lucius Malfoy. Lucius wants her to stop writing these silly novels right away. She has no intention of stopping, because her books are extremely popular in the Muggle world. Besides, she confided to his son, Draco, that everyone secretly likes the 'bad guy', and she likewise confided that she wished she had her 'own' Lord Lionel to love.

Lucius decided if Miss Granger won't stop writing her novels, then he'll grant her wish instead... Miss Granger - meet Lord Lionel (or is that Lucius Malfoy?)

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Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter
Genre: Romance
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: The Rose of September, Hermione and the Slytherins
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 8494 Read Count: 556;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 15, 2012 Updated: May 15, 2012


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Wish is Just a Wish

Hermione's books and deepest fantasies are coming to life. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Miss Hannah meets Lord Lionel

Hermione must have lusted after for a long while because she accepted his invitation without much hesitation. Let's see if Lucius/Lord Lionel delivers. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Disinclined to Agree

The deed is done and so is Lucius Malfoy because he has fallen for a very spirited and fearless heroine.

 
Summary: Feature

There were rules for everything: rules for how to act, rules for how to speak, rules of decorum, and even rules of love. However, sometimes rules were made to be broken.

Hermione Granger was engaged to one man, while Draco Malfoy was engaged to another woman. Together, they were celebrating the engagement of their friend, who was engaged to yet someone else. It seemed as if everyone was engaged to someone, but no one was engaged to the person they really wanted to be engaged to; therefore, it was time for someone to break a few of those rules, especially the harsh rules of engagement. (DRAMIONE with multiple other pairings)


 

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Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter
Genre: General, Humour, Romance
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: Lemon-Lime Sexytime , Naughty Language
Challenges: None
Series: The Lion and The Snake
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 115457 Read Count: 28927;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 15, 2012 Updated: Apr 06, 2014


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jun 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - The one where everyone pairs off into sets of twos

I'm only confident that Draco is going to 'get the girl'. How are the others going to achieve the same? Does Ginny want Harry back? That could be a problem. 

Elena



Author's Response:

She wants him back but he doesn't want her, which will be a problem. Another problem will be if Ginny underestimate Susan Bones!!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - The one where everyone is thinking one thing and saying something else

By the time they all figured it out they will have a severe migraine. I'm guessing everything will be resolved by the end of the weekend. At this point I'm not even sure if there's going to be a wedding. Or, maybe, instead of one wedding there'll be multiple weddings. This is a lot of fun!

Elena

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - The one full of incomplete conversations and minor productions

I share Hermione's question. If Draco hadn't seen her in years, why would he want her as a wife? When did Draco develop feelings for her?

All this eavesdropping might confused all of them. 

Elena



Author's Response:

Draco is a bit twisted, and misguided, and as always, it will take Hermione to set himm straight, but of course. Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - The one where everyone should be in bed, but aren't... yet

Hermione has a point. After love, trust is the most important part in any relationship. As for Draco's wish, Hermione should make Draco work really hard to earn her love and trust.

Ron is a bastard by the way. In real life, and having suffered the pain of infidelity in my marriage, I can assure you it's extremely hard to trust again. Haven't been able to do it after all these years.

ELena



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think that's a running theme in many of my stories... trust issues due to infidelities, and it's personal to me too. I've known people who have forgiven, and I guess the phrase, 'more power to them' applies, and if that makes them a bigger person than me, so be it, but once trust is broke with me, it's VERY hard to get it back. If there's one thing I hate  it's liars and bullies and people who betray my trust.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - The one the author wrote on vacation and is posting before the other one she wrote

This is the thing about Draco: he always lies and always has ulterior motives. He could tell Hermione the truth and by doing so show that while he has a good reason for wanting a wife and that he is also interested in her. But, he won't say anything but that he wants her or even that he is falling in love with her. When Hermione finds out the reason why Draco wanted a wife in the first place she is going to doubt his declaration of love.

There is a promise he made to someone that he would marry again. I have a few ideas and since I love guessing and then prove wrong here I go. Would there be a child he sworn to protect? Who knows about this promise/child? Is it a child conceived before or during his first marriage. Is it a promise to a friend?

I know you are going to surprise and something out from left field is coming but for now I stand by my conjectures.

Elena

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - The one where everyone throws fruit and a duck almost is murdered - twice

What exactly is Draco expecting from Hermione? Shouldn't Hermione be a bit weary of a man proclaiming not love but the need of a wife and in the same breath declare said wife it's going to be her?

Rose and Scorpius are in the middle of this mess, poor kids. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - The one the author wrote on vacation and is posting before the other one she wrote

Hermione is right, love is. On the other hand actions speak louder than words. The thing is that other than kissing Hermione senseless, appealing to her libido might not convinced her of Draco's intentions. Has he declare his love for her? No. He spoke of wanting a lover, a friend, a companion and more children. Maybe saying the word isn't as important.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - The one where no one listens but everyone hears

In order to avoid cliffhangers is better to either wait for the story to be finished or for it to have more chapters. Glad I have two more chapters to read. At least I'll avoid this one :)

So far my favourite couple is Harry and Susan. She is like an absent minded professor. She is not aware that Harry is attracted to her nor of the effect she has on him and yet, she likes Harry and misinterprets his actions. Harry is just too insecure.

Draco is keeping secrets, what else is new? 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 31, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - The one where everyone should be in bed, Part II

Here we go Draco and are going to do deed or more talking. What would change if they have sex?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - The one where no one listens but everyone hears

I was right for once! There is a child. Would Draco ever learn that if he tells the truth of his intentions Hermione wouldn't doubt or distrust him as much? He is addicted to never telling a truth.

My favourite couple, Harry and Susan are just too cute. Was she really that oblivious to Harry's touch and presence? I don't think so. I'd suggest that Harry needs to show her how he truly feels. Draco kisses Hermione to shut her up, to avoid answering questions and because he likes her. Harry could do the same.

Elena

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - The one where everyone throws fruit and a duck almost is murdered - twice

My goodness, I am finally able to start reading this story again! The truth is I am reading in order form oldest to recently updated. I also have a few bookmarked stories so my list is rather long. I miss your stories and being able to comment on them even though my reviews tend to be too long for no reason at all as you can see right this moment. I shall stop my ramblings and get on with it then.

It seems that Draco and Hermione can't help but physically attack each other. Just as teenagers do when they like someone. I see it every day at school. In your stories these two are either punching each other in the arm, pinching each other or throwing things at each other. Being in love makes us do silly things, right?

That poor duck better move before someone does away from him. Poor thing!

I'm keeping notes just so I can have a record of whom was seen kissing someone other than the person he/she is supposed to be engage to. Of course my notes keep track of who saw what.

So far my favourite pairings are Susan and Harry and Rose and Scorpious. It's getting complicated and it's so good I have so much chapters to read :)

Elena

 



Author's Response:

I love your insightful reviews!!! They make me think and I enjoy knowing your thoughts on the characters. Don't stop 'your long musings'. ever!

 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - The one where everyone remembers the night before at breakfast

Sex might complicate things for Hermione. Not so much for Draco, he is a man after all and so far he has demonstrated that sometimes his blood flow goes south to his little head as oppose to up where her grey matter lives. Hermione should not trust him but a little.



Author's Response:

HEHEHEHEHEHEHEEEE!!! This review made me laugh!

 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - The one where everyone talks about the same thing

Harry can't get a break can't he?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - The one where we find out Hermione's secret

Draco hasn't said 'I love you' Hermione is waiting for those words right after he proves to her. Draco is going to screw it up of course because saying what he means and meaning what he says is almost impossible for Draco.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - The one that takes place the morning after the night where everyone declares their feelings

Loving Harry and Susan much more than Draco and Hermione. Harry is so cute and considerate and oh so different from annoying Draco Malfoy. Yes, I enjoy Dramione but there are times when I can slap Draco silly.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - The One that took the Author Forever to Post (Not the original title, but an apt one, all the same)

It's like a crazy dance all this touching, and kissing without saying the three magic words. There is fear and there are doubts. I just hope Harry and Susan get together. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - The one where people see things they don't want to see

As much as I enjoy reading your stories, your Draco exasperate me to no end. Why is it that he can never, ever, say what he means? Why does he have to start his pursue of Hermione with lies? Why is it that Draco can't approach her without some plot all ready in progress? Slytherins are cunning, okay but that's not the only trait and who says cunning means incapable of speaking what is in one's heart once the goal is achieved?

What a difference when Harry interacts with Susan! Did he tease her when Susan accused him of kissing Ginny? No, he said the truth and played no games and voilá, problem solved. Susan is not a mouse in a maze Harry is playing with as opposed to Draco and his pathological need to bend the truth, lie or make fun of a situation. Mind you Hermione is not innocent either because her pursue of the truth is forgotten the minute Draco touches her. It makes her human I guess.

Let's find out what are Rose and Scorpius going to do with this new fact they heard. Too bad Ginny agreed to play Lucius's game. Fandom seldom treats Ginny well.

 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - The one where everyone thinks selfish thoughts that aren't all that selfish in the end

Draco redeemed himself in this chapter. Hermione needed to hear that he is interested in her as a woman not as a mother to her child and that he is willing to accept not having children made it even better. And Harry continues to put a smile on my face. Although I don't think his plans are going to work out unless he asks Susan to marry him before Scorpius reveals that he saw Ron and Pansy kissing.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - The one with three annoucements, two suprises, and one very small child

Oh crap! Everything is out in the open but nothing is resolved yet which means more is to come.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - The one with musings, cleaving, kissing and a bewildered Scorpius Malfoy

Thank you Susan for accepting Harry's proposal! 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - The one that takes place in the rain, with pain and suffering

What a relief! Scorpius told the truth. Why complicate things even more? Does Ginny really care if Ron marries Astoria or not? 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - The one that follows after chapter nineteen

Yeah, like you I'm glad Pansy is gone. She kind of felt like extra baggage. An appendage without purpose. Obviously there is tons still of story left. Much could and have happened so I'm preparing myself for unplesant developments. :)

Elena

 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - The one where Hermione tells Draco some bad news and he huffs and puffs and threatens to tear the mother-effing house down

That is one convoluted solution which will lead to more problems.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 -The one that starts with a lie and ends with the truth

Smart as usual your Hermione. Telling something as close to the truth as possible is always the best way to 'lie'. Now, telling the absolute truth to a few 'trusted' people almost never works so for the sake of Hermione and Draco the four involved in the scheme keep their mouths shut.

Since we are on the subject of marriage and totally nothing to do with your story; I've been dreaming about scenes of a story I'll never write and they have to do with marriage law. Not too fond of those type of fics and yet those scenes keep making appearances in my head. My muse is a sick lady. I'm having loads of problems with my one and only fic and yet here is my subconscious playing games with me.

Okay, I think this has been a long enough comment. Off to work.

Elena

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - The one where everyone makes weird noises at lunch and Hermione has too much wine

Yes, Susan is finally getting involved. Not that one more person meddling is necessary but as much as I like her, I found Susan a bit distant and now I see that she cares.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - The one where people have naked conversations

Nothing to do but keep on reading because I can't think of what else might go wrong.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - The one where Fiona seems to solve all the problems

Well! It appears as if a happy ending is near. But, is not over yet. What else can go wrong?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - The one where every conversation (as well as some kisses) are interrupted one way or another

There is a lot of love around. Love at first sight being the most common. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - The one that takes place on Friday afternoon

I thought "Oh no, don't believe Ginny you silly woman!" Thank goodness Hermione listened to Draco who for the first time has been saying the truth for the past few chapters. Good for him! Okay, so now, no more misunderstandings, late confessions or discoveries. Let's get married and live happily ever after.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - The one where Draco and Harry both ask questions and the answer to both of them is, 'I do'

Okay, so I don't have to slap Draco over the head and can go to work without murder in my mind. Much obliged :) The more I read fics depicting Hermione's and Harry's friendship the more I want them together. I adore your Harry. As for the perfect wedding? Hmmm, now that I've reached the second half of my life and having been married before it is not so much about seating arrangements, flowers, food and venue but whether or not you are marrying the man you truly love because that's all that matters.

Now, having someone else's wedding? Rather silly and unnecessary. That it was Harry who sensed that's what Hermione wanted doesn't surprise me. Draco is a selfish prat and as long as he gets what he wants he is blind to the half of the equation. He is not totally oblivious of course. Get on with then Draco. Give the woman you love the wedding of her dreams. They all know what they want, no more drama and secrets and listening behind doors, just get it done! My favourite part was Harry and Hermione. It is refreshing 'hearing' Hermione talking about her feelings without censoring herself.

Elena

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - The one where everyone smiles too much

i started reading your story at ffnet and by the third chapter I was so confused! Now that I'm reading it again I know who is going out with whom and who appears to be interested in some body other than the person they came with.

Hate the term 'babe' and ducky is just as irritating. Rogers is rather annoying and Hermione has put up with him for seven years? It's going to be such fun reading about the misunderstandings that are surely going to happen! 

Elena



Author's Response:

I adhor the word 'babe' and I tried so hard to think of an equally annoying word and 'ducky' came to mind. I'm glad you found it equally annoying... wait, did I just say that about my own story? HA!!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - The one where everyone talks about the same thing

Scorpius and Draco are going through the same thing. Both have known Rose and Hermione and yet, know nothing about them. 

Hermione can't have children or thinks she can't have children? Either way that's the reason for her hesitation to commit. Although she was engaged for seven years, and by her own admission without loving Roger. Did Hermione tell Roger about her condition? Is she going to tell Draco.

Honestly, all this sleeping around and being unfaithful tells me that most of these people aren't marriage material. With the exception of Hermione, Harry, Rose, Scorpius and Susan, I wouldn't trust the rest. Lying and/or cheating to someone you have a contract such as marriage means you're not to be trusted. 

Draco and his half truths, the man has a serious problem with stating true facts. Thank you Rose for telling Hermione the whole truth, or half the truth. I doubt Rose told Hermione about Lucius' threat to Draco.

Elena

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - The one where we find out Hermione's secret

Problem is, Hermione is going to learn from either of Draco's parents about the possibility of losing his daughter if he doesn't get married which will make Hermione wonder about the true reasons for his proposal.

I insist, Draco could have avoided it if he had told Hermione the whole truth. However, the truth is a foreign concept for Draco.



Author's Response:

Whoo hoo! This is my 100th review for this story on this site! I'm glad it was you. Funny, I used to get giddy when I would get 1000 reviews on a story, and now I'm all tied up in knots (in a good way) over 100 reviews. How times have changed!! Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - The one where everyone should be in bed, Part II

For whatever reason I'm more interested in Harry and Susan than Hermione and Draco. I think I'm having Dramione overload :). Might the motive for wanting to read more about Harry's or Rose's love life than Hermione's.

I wonder what kind of girl is Draco's daughter.



Author's Response:

Sad, but I'm more into the Harry/Susan storyline, too!

 
Summary: Feature

Story Completed!

She was everyone’s golden girl. He was born with a silver spoon in his mouth. However, people weren’t always what they appeared to be on the outside. Sometimes there was more to them than even they realized, especially when you took in consideration ancient Nordic lore, romance and suspense. (Veela/Fantasy/Valkyrie)



Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter
Genre: Drama , Fantasy , Mystery, Romance, Vampires / Supernatural
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: The Lion and The Snake
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45639 Read Count: 17472;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 15, 2012 Updated: Apr 28, 2013


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Cover

I'm always amazed at the ability you have not only to write wonderful stories but create such wonderful pictures. Lovely!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Tangled Web

This story has been in my 'to read list' for the longest time and I finally got to it. I don't think I've read that many Draco Veela fics, maybe a couple and I didn't enjoy them that much. Hermione as a Veela, never read one. Suffice to say those fics never made it to my fav list. I know nothing about Veelas and Nordic myths? Even less :(

However, you've written this story and I do enjoy your wonderful, complicated plots. As long as Hermione keeps some of the characteristics that make her the heroine I love I think I'll be okay. Okay, that's enough about this subject.

There's no body to speak of, hmm, I'm getting suspicious. Why wouldn't Hermione believe what they told her? She is a witch after all. Isn't Hermione's birthday on September 19? Or did you have to change for plot purposes?

Hermione threw me off a little with that out of character behaviour toward Draco but I guess it has to do with the Veela thing. I'm curious of course and oh so happy I have the time (sort of) to read this story!

Elena

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Choices Made

Wasn't expecting Hermione's mum to know the whole thing. May I make a few conjectures? In Hermione's dream, the woman flying on the horse is her, that I'm pretty sure of. The eagle might be Harry and the Volture is Devlin. Obviously the unconscious blond man is Draco.

My guess is that the man following Hermione and Draco is Devlin since he is also in love? with Hermione. Not sure about the whole attraction thing. Draco and Hermione hated each other and in the context of this story they did until just a few days ago when this urge to mate started so it can't be love. Do Veelas fall in love? Do they have a choice of whom to love? Or is it more like being addicted to a drug? Forgive me. This is me 'thinking and writing out loud.' 

There aren't many days left until Hermione's birthday so my questions shall be answered shortly. I'm liking this. :)

Elena

 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jul 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - A Vow of Silence

Hermione is asking the same questions I have, good that it's so. No matter that some of her sanity has been lost to lust, fear and confusion. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jul 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - A Whisper upon the Wind

I'm not sure Hermione will be able to hold it together and keep a cool head in order to make decisions. There might be more than just Draco and Devlin on the ship wanting to claim Hermione.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jul 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Tears From the Sea

Needing blood means what? They become vampires for a while or something else? Hmmm, this is getting better and better not so the back and forth between Draco and Hermione. At least Draco is telling her some truths although I'm sure he is hiding something, Draco always does.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jul 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Whispers of Fear

Hermione angry isn't in one's best interests. Hermione angry as she is about to turn into a Valkyrie is more dangerous. For someone who is use to facts not to have an answer is just as bad what is happening to her. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jul 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - What is Real?

This Draco of yours I like. Most of your Draco's are so bloody annoying! This one tells the truth, mostly. Is not as patronizing and is thinking of Hermione first. Except for that lecture about fear and being scared. I hate it when people tell what you're feeling or should be feeling! 

Hermione isn't dead so where is she then?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Moment of Clarity

I'm writing on my !Pad which is new to me. Took me a while to come back to reading, I missed it. Hermione is in charge and Draco has to trust her because of the two she can move. So, who did it? I have a few suspects, well only one :).

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - A Hand to Hold

Hermione no longer doubts what she and Draco feel for each. She is uncertain of what it's going to happen to her but at least she has Draco and Harry to help her.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - A Celebration of Sorts

Why not tell her The Whole Truth in one go? Why do it in bits and pieces as if Hermione were child?

Of course Devlin survived! Parasites are hard to kill.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - The Lady in White

Obviously I'm curious about the ascension and fearful of what Devlin might have up his sleeve.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - A Battle of Blood

Oh, boy! No one knows where they are, does it matter? Hermione is going to ascend regardless. On to the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - The Cave and the Runes

Here we go, ascension time!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Time to Begin

Only even chapters? Never noticed it, then again, I'm not very observant.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - The Ascension

Devlin needs to pay. Go Hermione!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - The Final Battle Begins and Ends

Happy ending and I learned a little about all those tales from Northern Europe so foreign to me. What a fantastic world! Thank you again for another entertaining story. I still prefer Hermione just as the Hermione I love and admire: Muggle born and nothing else.

 
The First Stone by AnneM Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Unhappily married to other people, Draco and Hermione have the chance to go back in time and change things, but if they do, will they change them for the better or the worst? The magic of 'The First Stone', a powerful amulet, may help them decide whether of not they should be selfish and change their own past, or if they should look to the greater good, and change the past of others, and in the long run, change their own futures - forever.  

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Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter
Genre: Drama , Fantasy , Mystery, Romance
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: The Lion and The Snake
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 61519 Read Count: 3600;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 16, 2012 Updated: Nov 21, 2013


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Love Thy Neighbour as Thyself

I'm too tired to follow all this, I'll take Draco's word that it is so. In my opinion James Potter was a cruel, coward bully whether Snape deserved or not his taunts and hexes. Too bad J K didn't expand or explain how is it possible that Lily could have gone from loathing to love in such a short time.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- Sins of the Father

It's been a while since I read one your stories. If Ron broke their vows and Hermione feels guilty too, does it mean she's done something just as bad in the past?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - The Path of Righteousness was Never Straight

I have all sort of questions. Hermione doesn't love Ron anymore, is this third child his? Is she in love with someone else? Does Draco want to change the past for his own motives rather than to prevent his wife from cheating on him?

Draco lies, your Draco lies all the time in all of your stories why wouldn't he lie now? Maybe he liked Hermione but dismissed it. Draco was dealing with a lot of pressure back in his sixth year and falling in love with the Mudblood wasn't even possible. Shall I stop now and continue reading before I make a total fool of myself? Yes, I should.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Turn the Other Cheek and Turn the Clock Back

This isn't going to be a Tom Riddle/Hermione fic, is it? I should have read the summary. If it is I'm very hesitant about moving on which means I shall read the summary. Intriguing, that's what came to my mind and as you have proven once again, full of surprises.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Beware of False Prophets

The Power of Three reminded me of 'Charmed', remember that TV series? Gosh that was so long ago! Of course I tried to follow what is what with the stone but became lost at one poing and decided to give up. Not the brightest tool in the shed as you can see. So who used the stone in this time? Voldemort? 

Harriet is known as Harry, what a coincidence. Not fond of some of the names in the Black and Malfoy families.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Cheaters Never Prosper, and Neither do they Linger

Cheating husbands, and I know from experience, aren't only selfish but oblivious and stupid. Ron is concerned people will find out he has been unfaithful, ignoring the pain his indiscretion will bring upon his family. Oblivious to everything but his mistress. So yay Harry for, at least in this story, taking Hermione's side.

Aurors use mobiles instead of owls? 

Scorpious sounds like a cute hellraiser.



Author's Response:

Magical mobiles.... ha!!!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Clear Deceit and Obvious Danger

Holy crap Batman!, the s@%*t is about to hit the fan. Draco is being so kind, is nice to see. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Without Human Touch, There is no Humanity

Draco being in love with Hermione isn't a surprise, that Scorpious knows it, that's something else. What did Draco use The First Stone for?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - For He So Loved the World

Draco lied for selfish reasons which resulted in this mess. Why am I not surprised? In the meantime Rose and Scorpious are trying to get their parents back and thanks to Draco, again, their children are in danger for no other reason than Draco's lies, selfishness and manipulation. No matter how old, Draco has and will always be a selfish bastard. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Love is Patient, Love is Kind

And when exactly did Draco and Hermione fall in love with each other?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - No Greater Gift

It would have been a lot easier for all involved, mainly Draco and Hermione, if they had divorced Astoria and Ron, and then re-married. I never understood why Draco has to take the most convoluted path to win Hermione.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Those Without Sin

Draco acting like his teenage son. This man has a lot of growing up to do.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Righting a Wrong

Four people working on their own agendas, chances are it will end up in a big mess and it all because of Draco Malfoy.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Cast the First Stone

Here is the thing, 'knowing' a life altering fact and not sharing as you are watching events unfold, cognizant that what is happening might end in a tragedy and you still keep that important secret to yourself for some lame reason is absolutely the most stupid thing one can do and this is just what Scorpius has done. Had he told Rose what he knew none of this would have happened. Apparently the Malfoy men are not as smart as one thinks. Shaking my head rather vigouroulsy because it just doesn't make sense to me. If lives are at risk, share the blasted information!



Author's Response:

I love how passionate your reviews are sometimes! Makes me think about things as an author. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - History Repeating Itself

Curiosity and a good dose of selfishness kill the cat or in this case Rose.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - When the Day is Done

Selfishness all around. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - A Price to Pay at a Terrible Cost

I smiled at the end. It was a happy, after all.

 
Summary:

The last time Draco Malfoy saw Hermione Granger, she was in the mud on the battlefield, close to death.  He saved her, but he didn't do it for her.  He did it for himself.  He was still a selfish person, after all. Now she was sitting across from him and she wanted to repay the debt.  He didn't need her to repay his 'kindness'.  He didn't need anything from her.  He only wanted her to leave him alone. 

Sometimes, fate has other plans. It was as if he had a sudden awakening, and in the end, it turned out that even though he saved her life, she may have saved his soul.

First published in July 2007


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Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter
Genre: Drama , Romance
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: Angst Angst Angst , Dubious Consent , Lemon-Lime Sexytime , Naughty Language, Someone dies , Violence
Challenges: None
Series: All the Other Ones
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 33155 Read Count: 1418;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 16, 2012 Updated: Sep 18, 2013


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I have read a lot of your stories and this is the cruelest, most despiteful, ungrateful son of a bitch Draco that you have ever written, therefore it would greatly disappoint me if Hermione falls in love with him. It already annoyed me the fact that she defended him when Draco brutalized her during the visit in prison. It enraged me that Harry took Draco in and not long after there was Draco abusing Hermione again and yet, no consequences. 

A broken, vulnerable Hermione I can take. Hermione accepting insults and abuse? It better be for a very good reason. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

These two are sick and most likely would end having a very dysfunctional, poisoned relationship. I have no idea what to think of all this. Draco is a bastard, nothing new there; Hermione is so traumatized that there is very little left of her. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I can't understand why they are acting this way.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Whether they stay in the Muggle world or not, it is a happy ending. 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

'One of things he didn't want to be honest about was that he didn't hate the Mudblood,' And yet the insult is right there, Mudblood.

A little confusing what's happening between Draco and Hermione. One minute he is behaving horribly toward Hermione, and Hermione acting so unlike her is painful and the next they are friends and the next they are lusting after each other and probably will find that they are in love with each other.

I know learning the truth about what Lucius did to Hermione is going to make me cringe. Harry is quick to make empty threats.



Author's Response:

I wanted Draco to stay COMPLETELY in character in this story. So, here's the deal. I had a dream one night. Earlier in the day I was writing a James/Lily story (one I've never finished) and I was thinking about it constantly before I went to bed. Then, that night, I dreamt most of 'A Sudden Awakening'. I dreamt of the interrogation scene almost to the T, and the fight for the key, which woke me up, scared and worried. Before then, I'd never dreamt of any stories, especially as I wasn't even working on a Dramione story at the moment. I wrote it all down (it was my second story, ever written for fanfiction) and in it I decided to keep Draco totally Draco. He starts out as a bastard, and remained pretty much one. He wasn't reformed in the beginning, he was still arrogant and self-righteous. He hadn't turned a new leaf where he's suddenly stopped thinking of her as a Mudblood, since that WORD and THOUGHT was still deeply embedden in his soul...

but wait, then he has an epiphany. Or a Sudden Awakening. He wants to be a better man. He turns his life around, but it's a struggle.

I didn't want him to be all sweet and gushy and love filled. I wanted it to be a slow transformation. I got a lot of grief for that when I originally wrote it six or so years ago, and I suppose I always willl, but this was one thing in this story I never regretted. Not once.

Love your ensightful, thoughtful reviews. It makes me want to sit down and talk to you sometimes. HA!

 
A Life Not Loved by AnneM Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Companion piece to 'A Sudden Awakening'

Draco once told her he hated her, and that he wanted her to leave him alone. Therefore, that's what she did. Why was he now at her door, claiming he was sorry, claiming he was wrong, claiming that he never hated her at all?  He told her he loved her, but she knew differently, for hers was a life not loved, at least not any longer. DRAMIONE


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First published August 2007


Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter
Genre: Drama , Romance
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: Angst Angst Angst , Lemon-Lime Sexytime , Naughty Language, Spoilers , Violence
Challenges: None
Series: All the Other Ones
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 34678 Read Count: 999;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 16, 2012 Updated: Sep 19, 2013


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Telling the truth doesn't mean there wouldn't be consequences. There is also mitigating factors.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I never thought he and Harry would come up with such a plan. Happy ending though, I was afraid it wouldn't happen.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you read this little story. it was one of my earliest works, but for some reason, it was one of the ones I was most proud of. Don't know why. Thanks again for being such a solid supported to your fellow writers!

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Harry and Draco have a point, the Muggle world isn't safe enough for Hermione. No idea why she would think it is.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Hermione is probably having a delayed reaction to everything that has happened to her.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

In the books there wasn't that much interaction of Hermione with her parents, except a few holidays. I believe they cared for her even though they were barely mentioned in the books.

 
Summary:

Hermione Granger works for the Department of Mysteries, where her current task is to examine dark objects.  She needs help, so the Minister of Magic gives her a 'dark object expert'.  Little did she know the 'expert' was none other than Lucius Malfoy. 

Lucius finds her incredibly irritating, very annoying, and extremely pretty.  He'll find helping her no problem at all, except when one object might just be the death of her, then, he'll find himself in a reluctant obligation to save her life.  He would just let her die, but he finds her quite fetching these days.  If he has to save her life, he will, but he'll want repayment of some type.  Will she repay the debt that is owed him for saving her life? (Lucius Malfoy & Hermione Granger)


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first published 6/2/2008


Categories: Fanfiction Characters: None
Fandom : Harry Potter
Genre: Drama , General, Romance
Genre, Nonfiction : None
Other Languages: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: The Rose of September, Hermione and the Slytherins
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 40359 Read Count: 2404;
[ Report Report This] Published: May 16, 2012 Updated: May 16, 2012


Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Must the Malfoy men be so bloody annoying and arrogant? Is there a rule in fandom that they have to be like this? I always wonder about the traits authors keep on writing about them. Lucius is what? Mid-fifties? Ten years in Azkaban and like thirty years older than Hermione what could she possibly see in him to be attracted to the man?

I can imagine what are you saying right now. "Why don't you keep on reading and stop your ranting?" Okay, I will and hopefully I won't wring Lucius virtual neck. :) You are the only one I can get away with my ramblings. Your patience is much appreciated.

Elena

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Selfish, arrogant and I wish Hermione would make his life miserable. Why didn't she report him to the Ministry right away? 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bound to happen and I can't imagine Hermione being anything but totally and willingly at Lucius mercy.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That blasted age difference gets in the way sometimes and I can't help but picture my twenty six year old daughter with a sixty year old man *shudders*. It's been argued by authors I brought age difference that wizards age differently than us and live longer therefore their physical appearance and age related shortcomings are not an issue.

So they had sex after a long conversation. Now they know each other better.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Someone is watching Hermione closely and he or she knows how to drive. The wizards trying to kill her, assuming the person driving is one, really want her dead if they are willing to risk having witnesses.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So Lucius Malfoy is in love.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, boy! Trouble ahead? Someone broke in or is he still inside? Lucius has a point, Hermione's life might be in danger because of him.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Right now I think lust is prevalent while love is taking the back seat. Tension does that to any kind of relationship and it has to be released somehow and having sex is the best method :) As long as the threat is disposed of and we can have our happy ending.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Still wrestling with the age difference. Wasn't Lucius born in 1954? If that's the case he is 25 years older than Hermione. My apologies, I should just stop my nagging about age difference. 

What a strange way to propose to Hermione.

 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Of course! So this death threat is about Lucius and he is finally telling Hermione some of the truth.

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Is there a 'right' time to reveal a painful truth, any truth? No. Knowing of something hurtful will hurt no matter what and that's why I've never understood why people keep certain facts from coming to light. Why is it that Lucius and Draco (in most of your fics) have this pathological need to lie, conceal or twist the truth?

Hiding the truth and then expose it hurts in more than one way because trust becomes a casualty. Anyway, Lucius for all his good intentions has messed up. If I were Hermione (she of course is going to forgive him and trust Lucius no matter how many times he manipulates and lies to her) I'd keep an emotional and physical distance until Allen's murder is solved.

Hermione needed to move on, no doubts about that but Lucius does something good (like protecting and loving her) and then shocks her with this monumental revelation.

 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

A muggle weapon, hmm, why? Is it to confuse them or is it really a muggle or muggle-born behind this threat?

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh, crap! 

 
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Death Eaters and their stupid beliefs. Of course the romance part of the story had me smiling.

 
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