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Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
Jan 12, 2015 03:20 PM
I love your stroy so far.

Author's Response: Thanks. ;)
Chapter 1
Reviewer: divess (Signed)
Jan 11, 2015 11:13 AM
Loved this story. I hope you will do a follow up. As much as I love Severus, I want to see him get a smack across the head. It would be brilliant. Thank you so much for sharing. I will now go back and start at the beginning. Ciao Bella.

Author's Response: Thanks for all your lovely comments. I am considering the follow-up but don't know for sure when or if it will happen. I'm thinking though that some of the Order members are outraged to learn how their former spy and war hero was used by Kingsley after the war. I also think that Severus' need to complete the mission even at the cost of using Hermione and Lucius' friendship might, at least in some part, have something to do with that vow to Kingsley. Hmmm... things to think about at least. :)
Chapter 5
Reviewer: divess (Signed)
Jan 10, 2015 07:15 PM
Excellent. Absolutely excellent, but now I'm all teared up. Poor Hermione. She is hurt and it will be damned hard for Lucius to find her.....unless she went back to the cottage for whatever reason. I knew Linton was shady, but didn't think about him being a Death Eater. Loved it. Also loved how the gang came to the rescue. Please fix this thing between Lucius and Hermione. Please. Well done. See you next chapter.

Author's Response: *grins* So glad you loved it. Only one chapter left to go and don't worry too much dearie, I'm really a HEA kind of girl. ;)
Chapter 4
Reviewer: divess (Signed)
Jan 09, 2015 01:24 PM
Love it. Great chapter. I thought it was going to go in a different direction. I don't know why Hermione was so upset. They are magical. Of course they could experience instant attraction. I laughed out loud at Severus "ogling" Hermione. See you next chapter.

Author's Response: She's upset because she's been 'unlucky in love' in her life and she thought that what she was feeling for Lucius was finally the real thing. Now she's not so sure though. She's worried that the attraction between them is false, that it's actually the result of some kind of compulsion or lust charm.
Chapter 3
Reviewer: divess (Signed)
Jan 08, 2015 09:23 PM
OMG. These chapters are too short. I am loving this story. And now one of my main men has shown up. Severus Snape. This is going to be mouthwatering. See you next chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying. I thought Severus' entrance was quite dramatic. LOL!
Chapter 2
Reviewer: divess (Signed)
Jan 07, 2015 06:58 PM
Excellent start. I think your story is going to be hot. Little Lu. Too funny. Thanks for sharing. See you next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, for reading, glad you like it so far. The story is already done so I will be posting it fairly quickly.
Chapter 1
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