Reviews For The Secret Bride

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Reviewer: Brady12 (Signed)
Mar 08, 2017 10:01 AM
Is this going to ever be updated?
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: joanna (Signed)
Aug 01, 2016 12:46 AM
I like this story, please continue.. please.. please.
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Nov 04, 2015 05:32 AM

Hey... I was reading a fourth and final week in life over and over again, (and definitely crying again), and i was wondering when will you updating this story... I really really really love all of your stories and I know you have a real life and real responsibility in a real life... but pleasee pleasee pleaseee updateee... and tbh nowadays is it really hard to find a nice dramione story to be read.. so I hope seeing my favorite author soon...

I love you... ♥♥♥♥

Chapter 8 - Wooing Time
Reviewer: RechelBethel (Signed)
Sep 28, 2015 04:26 AM
This is my favorite chapter of the story...I hope you'll finish it...p.s I am waiting chapter 10 since forever please don't put the secret bride on hiatus :(
Chapter 2 - To See Him Again
Reviewer: Lady Holly (Signed)
Sep 20, 2015 07:52 PM
The story is so very cute,I like it,
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: Reverseuniverse (Signed)
Aug 13, 2015 05:12 PM
Now that's a fantastic cliff hanger! I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewer: Msashleyz (Signed)
Jul 28, 2015 08:35 PM
Well written... Needs a few chapters to be complete.
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Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Jun 24, 2015 06:24 PM
Im desperate
Update plzzz
I have nothing to say
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
May 26, 2015 03:22 AM
Updateeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeee
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
May 04, 2015 04:43 AM
you're making and finishing two other story, yet you abandoning this story.... pleaseeeee updateeeee....
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Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
May 04, 2015 04:43 AM
you're making and finishing two other story, yet you abandoning this story.... pleaseeeee updateeeee....
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Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
May 01, 2015 04:54 AM
updare please... few days before my mid exam, so please update....
pleaseeeeeeeee
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Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 28, 2015 12:48 AM
update pleaseeeeee
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Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 20, 2015 02:27 AM
when will you updating this story?

you uploading new story but didn't update....
please update soon
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 18, 2015 09:15 AM
I'm starting to thinking that I'm annoying...
but I don't care, really.

update pleaseeee
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 17, 2015 07:02 AM
hey there, i don't have any other to say..

please update soon...
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 16, 2015 05:56 PM
poor me....
I'm still waiting for update...
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 13, 2015 08:28 AM
the best cliffhanger in my dramione history..
I've been checking this site 3 times in a day for about two weeks..
are you abandoning this story?I really need another chapter... or I will die because my curiosity...
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 13, 2015 08:24 AM
woo woo woo wooing wooing wooing
I don't know what else to be written in my review..
what kind of compliment should i wrote so you will update the story????
Chapter 8 - Wooing Time
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 13, 2015 08:22 AM
I hate cucumber too...
but seriously..
Horatio Hornblower
Gavin Goosebottom
Donald Duckworth

you know... i wondering when will you updating again?
are you even planning to finish this story?
Chapter 7 - Tea For Two and Two for Tea
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 13, 2015 08:19 AM
seriously, both of them act like they didn't like and need each other when they do. It really drive me crazy...
update pleaseee
Chapter 6 - Dress for Success (or For a Cup of Tea)
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 13, 2015 08:17 AM
i wonder what kind of mind do you have?
how could there is something different in every dramione story you wrote?


update pleaseee...
I will reviewing every chapter of this story, over and over again... you will find me annoying and give me the next chapter...
Chapter 5 - The Morning After the Rain
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 13, 2015 08:16 AM

Well, he was back and he had no intention of leaving ever again.---- I love how determined draco in this sentence... update pleaseee... for sure i will reviewing every chapter of this story, over and over again... you will find me annoying and give me the next chapter...

Chapter 4 - Neither of Them Can Sleep
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 09, 2015 09:14 PM
if i were hermione when draco said I do, I probably got an heart attack because of deja vu...

can you please please please update chapter 11? or even updating the whole rest of the story? can you? please!!!!!!!
Chapter 3 - He Moves In
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 08, 2015 05:00 PM
the way draco keep calling hermione wife really.... what can I say? it really warming up my heart...

when will you give me chapter 11?
Chapter 2 - To See Him Again
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 08, 2015 12:56 AM
I almost can't hold my tears when draco said I'm sorry and left Hermione after their vow.... it really sad.
yet I can't hold my excitement after two years they met and draco said. “I have no intention of granting you a divorce, Granger, so there’s no need
for this meeting to take place. I’ll talk to you later, I suppose.”
is that sort of epiphany?

can you please grant me a reward? i really need chapter 11 for goodness sake.... pleaseee
Prologue and Chapter 1
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 06, 2015 11:53 PM
" Draco finally said, “Because I loved her. I think I always
have, and I know I always will.” "

this line is so cheesy yet i love it very much...

when will you gave me the next chapter?
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 06, 2015 11:53 PM
" Draco finally said, “Because I loved her. I think I always
have, and I know I always will.” "

this line is so cheesy yet i love it very much...

when will you gave me the next chapter?
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 06, 2015 03:40 PM
I'm not sure about something I should or shouldn't write on my review.... so instead can you update??? pleaseeeee
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Reviewer: britagi (Signed)
Apr 05, 2015 10:55 PM
heyyy theree, I've been your faithful reader of your dramione story, since I've found ffn world, and yet this is my first review...

can you pleaseee updatee... i really can't wait for the next chapter...
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Mar 26, 2015 06:20 PM
Love is always a game changer.
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Mar 26, 2015 06:11 PM
Yes, nice place to stop.
Chapter 8 - Wooing Time
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Mar 26, 2015 06:06 PM
Well there, that's all clear, and in the open. As a mud pit.
Chapter 7 - Tea For Two and Two for Tea
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Mar 26, 2015 05:55 PM
Great tension between them.
Chapter 6 - Dress for Success (or For a Cup of Tea)
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Mar 26, 2015 05:46 PM
I am not sure about Hermione's logic there. But he does want to stay so it will work out anyway.
Chapter 5 - The Morning After the Rain
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Mar 26, 2015 05:40 PM
:-) nice exchange between distant intimates.
Chapter 4 - Neither of Them Can Sleep
Reviewer: Rose Davis (Signed)
Mar 06, 2015 04:30 AM
Oh, love how sneaky thou art. Beautiful just, beautiful.
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
Mar 05, 2015 07:53 AM
Poor confused Draco but thank goodness for a bit of eavesdropping. ;)
Chapter 9 - How Does a Man Woo his Wife?
Reviewer: poe99 (Signed)
Jan 24, 2015 01:54 PM
Awww that was a nice chapter, they admitted they want to stay married after all! Me likes Malfoy senior - he is just the right blend, cool, wicked, manipulative ;-)
Chapter 7 - Tea For Two and Two for Tea
Reviewer: poe99 (Signed)
Jan 24, 2015 01:36 PM
Very good descriptions, so easy to picture! Those two fools are playing with fire, I hope Narcissa can stir something up!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!
Chapter 6 - Dress for Success (or For a Cup of Tea)
Reviewer: poe99 (Signed)
Jan 24, 2015 01:18 PM
How very slytherin of you Hermione! At my house the one who empties the coffeepot makes another pot of coffee so there ;-) Enjoying this so much!
Chapter 5 - The Morning After the Rain
Reviewer: poe99 (Signed)
Jan 24, 2015 12:40 PM
I hate storms too, so I am totally with Draco on that one! How could she not take him to bed - that boy is so HOT!
Chapter 4 - Neither of Them Can Sleep
Reviewer: poe99 (Signed)
Jan 24, 2015 12:05 PM
Poor Hermione, being left with all the mess and gossip like that, glad she told him already. Draco dear boy you have some making up to do to that lovely lady!
Chapter 3 - He Moves In
Reviewer: poe99 (Signed)
Jan 24, 2015 11:30 AM
their banter is priceless I enjoy it very much! And I get the feeling Granger just agreed to a very slytherin kind of deal ha ha!
Chapter 2 - To See Him Again
Reviewer: poe99 (Signed)
Jan 24, 2015 11:01 AM
I do love your writing. Read some of your work on fanfiction, and decided to check this site out after I read your bio!
This is looking real good, can't wait to read on!
Prologue and Chapter 1
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
Jan 13, 2015 05:06 PM
This reminds me of those charming, quick witted 1930's romances. Very enjoyable.

PS Happy New Year,

Author's Response: Thank you!!
Chapter 8 - Wooing Time
Reviewer: lrmorena (Signed)
Dec 05, 2014 05:23 AM
That is soooooo sweet! Thank you Pat!
Chapter 7 - Tea For Two and Two for Tea
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
Nov 24, 2014 05:27 PM
Wonderful chapter.
Chapter 7 - Tea For Two and Two for Tea
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
Nov 24, 2014 05:13 PM
Very enjoyable chapter.
Chapter 6 - Dress for Success (or For a Cup of Tea)
Reviewer: diebirchen (Signed)
Nov 07, 2014 03:40 PM
Certainly not. Great story!
Chapter 6 - Dress for Success (or For a Cup of Tea)
Reviewer: lrmorena (Signed)
Sep 21, 2014 02:20 PM
Lovely & Steamy... Perfect!
Chapter 6 - Dress for Success (or For a Cup of Tea)
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
Sep 06, 2014 05:10 AM
I think she just might be asking for trouble but who can blame her. Very enjoyable chapter.
Chapter 5 - The Morning After the Rain
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
Aug 04, 2014 09:56 PM
I cannot wait to see how Draco achieves his goal with Hermione. Wonderful story.
Chapter 4 - Neither of Them Can Sleep
Reviewer: lrmorena (Signed)
Aug 04, 2014 05:42 PM
. LOVE IT!
Chapter 4 - Neither of Them Can Sleep
Reviewer: Sampdoria (Signed)
Aug 03, 2014 09:55 AM
Thank you so much for the update
Chapter 4 - Neither of Them Can Sleep
Reviewer: cklls (Signed)
Jul 30, 2014 05:33 PM

Every once in a while, your semicolon boo-boos drive me a little nutty. That being said, you are the only author whose infrequent punctuation errors I will completely overlook. (Yes, I fully admit to being a SPaG snob, dialogue punctuation errors being a particular pet peeve.) I invest my time in reading your work regardless of those imperfections because you are just such a marvelous (and wonderfully prolific) storyteller. This new offering is no exception. Brava for an engaging, intriguing plotline and just enough "will they/won't they pull it together" that I'm irrevocably hooked.

Chapter 4 - Neither of Them Can Sleep
Reviewer: Sampdoria (Signed)
Jul 30, 2014 02:32 PM
Thank you so much for a great update
Chapter 4 - Neither of Them Can Sleep
Reviewer: diebirchen (Signed)
Jun 26, 2014 07:40 AM
Great story . . . waiting for more! :-)
Chapter 3 - He Moves In
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
May 16, 2014 03:59 PM
A very enjoyable read, as always. :)
Chapter 3 - He Moves In
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
May 14, 2014 07:51 AM
I really like the premise of this story! Thank you for sharing it.

As to the carrot, I will not sign up again, ever. I do not leave reviews in hopes of being rewarded, I leave them because something in the story touched me or otherwise made an impact, and I want to encourage the author by letting them know.
Chapter 3 - He Moves In
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
May 14, 2014 07:39 AM
“I must be crazier today than I was the day I agreed to marry you, but fine. Help me find another husband in three months, Malfoy. I’m all yours.”

LOL, be very careful what you agree to there Hermione!
Chapter 2 - To See Him Again
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
May 14, 2014 07:29 AM
Oh Draco, figure out what you want and fight for it.
Prologue and Chapter 1
Reviewer: Eile (Signed)
May 13, 2014 04:10 PM
Just read first few chapters! Brilliant! Can't wait for more!
Chapter 3 - He Moves In
Reviewer: Kate_Juniper (Signed)
May 09, 2014 08:22 PM
I really enjoy the ideas behind this story. I can't wait to see how it unfolds. I also can't wait to see the dates that our Mrs. Grainger-Malfoy is made to endure. I am waiting in pins and needles.
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Reviewer: lrmorena (Signed)
May 08, 2014 02:39 PM
I really love this one... Different and very moving in some way... Two lost souls that for better or for worst are together and found love.... HEY that sound PERFECT. Happy Mother's Day!

Author's Response: That's how I want it to seem. And although this isn't an 'angst' story, it isn't really a romantic comedy either. I want it to have some depth of character, which will follow. I wrote most of the next chapter today, and I made Draco admit, at least to himself, that he's lonely and the real reason he wants to stay with her is because he wants to make a go of marriage with her. I don't know when he'll reveal that to her, but at least he's being honest with himself for a change. Thanks!!
Chapter 3 - He Moves In
Reviewer: jamies_lady (Signed)
May 08, 2014 02:41 AM
this chapter had me in tears.. I felt so sorry for Hermione and I don't think i could ever forgive Draco for what he did... betrayal is such a deep wound
Chapter 3 - He Moves In
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
May 05, 2014 08:17 PM
Very enjoyable, thank you,
Chapter 2 - To See Him Again
Reviewer: lrmorena (Signed)
Apr 24, 2014 02:50 PM
This have all the marks for a good and funny story.... LOVE IT ALREADT
Chapter 2 - To See Him Again
Reviewer: jamies_lady (Signed)
Apr 23, 2014 09:07 AM
poor hermione, what has she let herself in for.. more please
Chapter 2 - To See Him Again
Reviewer: khyahrah (Signed)
Apr 01, 2014 03:40 PM

Very interesting beginning. Wonder what princess Hermione has been up to for the past two years. Interested to see more!

Prologue and Chapter 1
Reviewer: serpantstongue (Signed)
Mar 24, 2014 03:26 PM

I like where this is going! I can't wait for more :)

Prologue and Chapter 1
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed)
Mar 24, 2014 02:09 PM

Draco is one confused manchild.  Will Hermione give him a kick in the pants?  He deserves one.

Prologue and Chapter 1
Reviewer: Rogue588 (Signed)
Mar 23, 2014 09:18 PM

Wow! Is Draco bipolar or something lol. Great start to a brand new story. :)

Prologue and Chapter 1
Reviewer: ctc (Signed)
Mar 23, 2014 08:10 AM
poor confused Draco....
Prologue and Chapter 1
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