Oh my lord! My heart is breaking for poor sev! And there is no need! Oh I can not wait for the next chapter!! Please don't keep us waiting to long!
really goood. so even ONLY one more chapter, they will stay happily forever. Do me a favor and write Ron's reaction when he realise they are HAPPY and SEXY couple :-))))))))
Another fascinating chapter! I'm really enjoying the complex thoughts and reactions of both Severus and Hermione. Well done!
What a horrible place to end that chapter! More, please.
First, I have to congratulate you on the hotness that was this chapter and the last. Your Lucius is delicous, and your Snape is delectable.
Second, congratulations on your coming joy! Woo Hoo for motherhood!
Lucius and Severus together are always a pleasing thing to read. I love how Severus was so angry at the things that happened to her, and also how he was almost trying to convince himself, and Lucius, that being with her was such a bad idea.
Nice, long, savoury chapter. Although I always find it hard to believe Ron would be such a dick to Hermione, I think it was a neccessary ploy in this story, so I overlooked that. The torture scene, while hard to read (because it was so raw and real) was still done with taste and was very well written. As you know, I'm not the biggest Severus and Hermione fan, but if done right and believeable, I'm happy to read any story with them as romantic. This was well done all the way around.
*happy sigh* I'm absolutely loving this story. Seeing Severus care for Hermione this way makes my insides go all squishy. *grin* And I can't stop laughing about his unexpected hair removal! *snort* I can't wait for more. :)
ohh such a good another chapter. So Severus finally accepted, and Ron can go to helllllllll or even deeper :-))
Severus' indecision felt very real--thank goodness Lucius was there to act as a catalyst. I wonder if Lucius sees it that way? ;)
Absolutely intriguing--I can't wait to see how this develops. :)
Wonderful! I confess, I did read it already over at LJ. But, I'll review here.
Wow, just wow! You've tackled an extremely tough subject and managed to portary the emotions with just great delicacy while still giving the sharp emotional impact that the story needs. Great job! Thanks so much for sharing this,
Oh, my. I think this is quite a realistic picture of what life could be like for Hermione after the war, both her reactions and Ron's. :( Severus was delightfully in character with his caring attitude masked by snark and clipped statements. The Obliviate idea seems dangerous--I can't help but hope that Severus finds a way to help her deal with her past instead of merely erasing her memories of it.
Hermione's burgeoning attraction to Severus seems to bode well, as does his attention to her backside. *snicker* Any chance of you posting more often than weekly? *crosses fingers hopefully*