Reviews For Salvation

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Reviewer: jamies_lady (Signed)
May 27, 2013 07:15 AM

gaaaahhh you left it there??!!! I love your portrayal of Narcissa and Lucius... please update soon



Author's Response:

Heh. Evil is my middle name. 

Thanks for the riview. I will update this today.

 

Chapter 14
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
May 26, 2013 05:15 AM

Oh wow. I said that aloud at the end of the chapter, so I wrote it. Very well done and you certain leave a reader wondering and mapping things out in their minds... trying to figure out what's going on and is this fact signficant, is that one? Finely crafted writing here!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

I will be uploading the rest of the story today.

Chapter 4
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
May 26, 2013 05:05 AM

A fine slice of their lives so far. Draco's pain was written very well!



Author's Response:

Thans so much.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Chapter 3
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
May 25, 2013 04:03 PM

That end part was unexpected! Great job so far!



Author's Response:

It was, wasn't it?   LOL!  I've glad you liked it. I have posted two more chapters if you're interested.

Chapter 2
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
May 25, 2013 03:59 PM

This is such an interesting start and well crafted. I usually shy away from original characters in the lead roles in stories, but I'm very intrigued at this one. Onward to the next chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank so much for your kind words.  I know many people have been burned by the Sues of any fandom.  I worked really hard not to make a Sue, and to incorporate her as seamlessly as possible into the HP world.  I'm glad it is working for you.

Chapter 1
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