gaaaahhh you left it there??!!! I love your portrayal of Narcissa and Lucius... please update soon
Author's Response:
Heh. Evil is my middle name.
Thanks for the riview. I will update this today.
Reviews For Salvation
Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
May 26, 2013 05:15 AM
Oh wow. I said that aloud at the end of the chapter, so I wrote it. Very well done and you certain leave a reader wondering and mapping things out in their minds... trying to figure out what's going on and is this fact signficant, is that one? Finely crafted writing here!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
I will be uploading the rest of the story today.
Chapter 4
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May 26, 2013 05:05 AM
A fine slice of their lives so far. Draco's pain was written very well!
Author's Response:
Thans so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Chapter 3
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May 25, 2013 04:03 PM
That end part was unexpected! Great job so far!
Author's Response:
It was, wasn't it? LOL! I've glad you liked it. I have posted two more chapters if you're interested.
Chapter 2
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May 25, 2013 03:59 PM
This is such an interesting start and well crafted. I usually shy away from original characters in the lead roles in stories, but I'm very intrigued at this one. Onward to the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Thank so much for your kind words. I know many people have been burned by the Sues of any fandom. I worked really hard not to make a Sue, and to incorporate her as seamlessly as possible into the HP world. I'm glad it is working for you.
Chapter 1
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