And I want them to go to the ball. This chapter raised more questions than answering answers. Sweet.
there is a ball, as I'm sure you've read by now
Sort of a filler chapter, but I was still riveted to every single word. I think I'm still in shock a bit from the last chapter.
Achingly beautiful in a way. I'm sort of at a loss of words at the moment, and don't know why.
This isn't over is it? I finally caught up with it. It seems wrapped up, but not finished, you know? Wonderful job with one of my fav fandoms. I told you from the beginning, but I need to repeat that you really had all of the charachters down pat!
nope, there is lots to come... when I'm back from Bloodstock and have more internet acess, glad you enjoyed it so far
Nice and cosy wrap up.
more to come yet :)
Andrew, the poor soul,gets his rest from torment. Nicely done.
Bad guys locked away, time to celebrate and rest, well at least some.
It amazes me that I have very specific faces with each of your characters even though I have never seen an episode, and only know Buffy because of the actress and Spike because of pictures I have seen with stories in fandom or on FB.
Thank you for your compelling and engaging writing style.
The amazing strength of a pissed off female! Certainly not something to be trifled with. Thank you for another exciting chapter.
That did not take long at all. And so the show begins! Yippee-ei-ky-aye!
Well, we now have a plan, all the players gathered and so assuming next will begin the enactment. Onward to the continuation of the story! Thank you.
Spike is so swoon worthy, especially with little William and he's even putting aside his 'feelings' for Xander. I have to admit I feel a bit confused at some of the happenings (back story) but I know you'll explain it all to me in the end.
Interesting turn of events, I must say. I like Spike explaining everything, basically, to me. Onward...
Well it is always nice to get family history from knowledgable individuals. Completed healing from a touch, an added benefit. Thank you for sharing your talents.
and thank you for all the reviews... there are ore chapters waiting for you
A terrible thing, but great gift, to remember after having been made to forget.
I really feel like this is a true 'movie' from the show, because I see it all so clearly, and you have the relationships and banter between the characters down pat!
It's heartbreaking hearing how she lost the baby and knowing that Spike wasn't there to help her at the time. So much loss. Hope someone pays dearly for it!
I really enjoyed this chapter!
And perhaps now we can have a tender moment between our two fav characters, huh??
Whoa, talk about action!
about time he saw the light. You really write Spike well!
well buffy what do you expect?
And now things get complicated!
Yeah, I can not imagine she would be real happy with his thoughts, no matter how she would like the same end.
Tough day for Martin. Here is hoping they talk things through, well as much as they are want to actually talk.
Oh but darling he does want you, just listen as he spills his ever loving guts to you. Should he man up and follow through.
Thank you once again for a world with which it is easy to connect with the characters.
but it simply can't be that easy.. lol
He is smart enough to realize he is not yet physically strong enough to actually help isn't he?
If he's not the other slayers will keep him safe
And things are on their way back to 'normal'; as normal as there is in this storyline. Now how big a mess will he find, that is the next question.
there are a couple more hiccoughs to go yet....
Misunderstandings is all, Dawn will help straighten that all out. (I think)
Wonderfully rich story you have going, I am unsure where it is going but enjoying the ride along the way. Thank you.
it might be Dawn, it might not be,,,,
Straightening out timeline bumps is a precise and dangerous task. A simple snatch and switch this was not, good thing two went.
they certainly don;t need any annomalies at this point
Intense trauma center. Seems like there will be hell to pay on those that caused the pain of so many. I certainly would not want to be Giles or Wolfram and Hart or anyone around them.
The centre will be needed, unfortuantley... glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for all the reviews
Oh to have a little fun as warm up, and serve a bit of humble pie to boot, what a way to prove your point ladies.
I think they had fun
Bad feelings there! Not without reason, but they will have to be worked through.
therewill be lots of sorting through by the end....
A reunion is underway!
the reunion is on its way
Good thing to not lock doors.
just one tiny spot to fix dear, ...slayer, they make look like weak females but they can kick your asses,
may rather than make, and that may be an auto correct or a finger habit, but the word does need to be the correct one. Caused me to stop, re-read and then put in the correct word. Thought you would like to know.
fixed and thank you, no matter how many times you check something, one always seems to slip through
Yup, "don't annoy the little lady".
Love it, that was a precious interchange.
thank you dear one for such entertaining and exciting reading.
and thank you for all the wonderful reviews...
A little more to the mystery there. Whose baby boy and how does that information fit into the story, or rather when? Loving your little twists and information bombs.
loved this review.. i thoroughly enjoy dropping tiny clues along the way, then the reader finding out they were major plot points only a lot later
Cordy indisposed by interdimesional travel?
Cordy has a lot of irons in the fire and is 'playing' with them
Always better to know what one is up against before battle, and I do sense battle coming.
At least one battle
Talk about walking into the 'lions den'.
and without bck up. lol...
There are times when a 'less than perfect' background comes in handy, and always trust instincts.
Some of the slayers have interesting skill sets
What a visit. And oh Xander, wringing will only get you double duty. (Hee,hee)
thank you darling for the entertaining story.
I think me not knowing the original story is of some import here. But I am reading this as if this is the story, still enjoying it though. Thank you for a world with enough detail to do this.
Oh the magic of being in two places, it is well, magical. Sorry, a little tired tonight, things striking me weirdly funny.
trying working out all the kinks for 2 places at once.. now that was fun
Long lost now found. And now on to some more serious business, I suppose. Bravely going forward.
there will be lot of fetching what is lost...
Those nasty things that lurk in our pasts, that come back to haunt us. In this case 'bite him in the arse'. I do kind of like knowing I have many chapters to go and not worry about the cliffs each time. Thank you.
we all have shadows, but I don't think they are as bad as these ones...
Some how this one flew in under my radar, I am back to read and wonderful treat for me there are many chapters! Thank you.
so glad you are enjoying this one
I got another chapter today after all, didn't I? And you brought Spike back. Can't wait for him to wake up and to read about the reunion.
the reunion is on its way, honest....
Very well written chapter. The action was very intense.
thank you.. it was tough to work out
Good chapter, but where's my Spike?
spike's coming, I promise :)
WOW, Spike is coming back! YEAH!
of course he is, spuffy is no fun without spike
Ingenious plot so far!
This isn't a review, per sa, although I just read this chapter. BUT... would you like a banner for this one, too? I downloaded a bunch of Buffy pictures for the other one. Something dark and forbodening, perhaps? let me know. If you don't, that's cool too.
whimper banner... yes please I would love it
I know I keep saying this, but you have the characters spot on, as the exchange between Xander and Cordy proves. And poor Spike... hating Heaven. Only he would hate Heaven.
thank you for the review and yes, only Spike would hate it
HATE GILES in this story! All the lies and deceit. Payback and Buffy are going to be a bitch!
the challange was to make Giles the baddie... so I delighted it worked
CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!
more waiting for you... so glad you are enjoying it
Giles is truly dispicable in this tale of slayers.
it was one of the challenges I was givem.. make Giles into a really nasty piece of work, but keep it within the series... I hope I succeeded
Whoa, intense and painful to read, but that's the point. Just, wow.
thank you... it was hard to write as well
I feel so badly for Buffy. I recall that season and how painful it was for her to be ripped out of heaven, and how she was happy there, and came back to sorrow and sadness. Your made me remember it all so vividly. Wonderful writing my dear friend!
thank you so very much, I am thoroughly enjoying your reviews
I love your Xander as much as I love your Willow.
thank you... I wanted Xander to be lovable
I LOVE YOUR WILLOW!!! SHe is so spot on it's crazy! WHen she told Cordellia 'What with you being dead and all' and 'may I say UGH and add an Ewww' I actually laughed aloud!
thank you.. Willow was fun to write... and glad you enjoyed it all
Giles? Betraying them all? Say it isn't so.
I had fun with this one....not saying, walks away whisteling
That was very intense. And I have a feeling there's more here than meets the eye.
another one of my weavings
Ah, an in to the next disaster. Here we go, thank you for sharing your talents with words.
hope you enjoy the twists and turns in this one
What a way to start a story! I almost forgot about Riley. And Spike... huh? No way. He's okay. Not dead.
got you hooked? that's good.. thanks for the review