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Reviewer: Sampdoria (Signed)
Jul 25, 2014 03:08 AM
I think Torie and Cougar are among my favourite characters in your original works. This story is still as smashing as it was the first two or four times I have read it:-))

Author's Response: thank you so very much... i fell in love with cougar as well..
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Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Nov 03, 2013 04:07 PM

Beautiful wrap! Thank you for the ride. I do so love touring the worlds you creat.



Author's Response: and thank you for a lovely review... glad you enjoyed it
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Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 31, 2013 05:48 PM

New baby, yeah! Thank you for givin Tory the happiness she deserved. Good luck with your writing.

Elena

Chapter 9
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Oct 30, 2013 07:10 AM

Priveledge breeds as many jerks as poverty. Larry's due has finally arrived. 

You left us with a most beautiful wedding night! Thank you. You truly have a most magical way with words, it is a. Priveledge to read them.



Author's Response:

thank you for a wonderful review.. the final chapter is up and ready for you.... and thank you for all your support

Chapter 8
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 29, 2013 04:01 PM

So glad the ex didn't spoil the fun. Some people can't let go to save their life! I don't know why I thought I had read the last chapter. Can't wait for the epilogue!

Elena



Author's Response:

He had to turn up again, but they all kept him away fromTorie :)

Epilogue is with the beta now

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Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Oct 26, 2013 07:33 PM

What a beautiful story! Thank you for the detail and beauty that you infuse throughout.



Author's Response:

another chapter is up.. thank you for a lovely review

Chapter 7
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Oct 26, 2013 06:44 PM

What a beautiful picture you weave with your words. Thank you for sharing so the others can enjoy this world as well.

Chapter 6
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Oct 22, 2013 08:12 PM

Beautiful and so...down to Earth. I'm going to miss them.



Author's Response:

there is another chapter up and ready for you

Chapter 7
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Sep 26, 2013 04:11 PM

I could picture the dresses, so beautiful! Welcome back by the way. It didn't take you long to update, thank you! I do hope the wedding goes on without any problems.

Elena



Author's Response:

The update was nearly finihsed when I went away, I was just waiting for it to come back from the beta.... and glad you enjoyed the chapter, more soon.. I hope

Chapter 6
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Jun 20, 2013 04:10 PM

You've such a nice balance of detail that it is very easy to be in the story. Thank you for sharing your talent.



Author's Response:

thank you, I always worry about that balance....between minute detail and broad strokes

Chapter 5
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Jun 17, 2013 06:59 PM

The ex managed to sour the mood for a little while. Wonder what else might happen before the wedding. Couldn't help myself and jumped ahead of my 'to read list' :) 



Author's Response:

and thank you for the review... they do make a difference to me....

 

and yes the ex is a pain

Chapter 5
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Jun 17, 2013 06:47 PM

Minnie is one feisty lady and well done putting those stuffy relations in their place.



Author's Response:

Very feisty and what would have been called mouthy if she was a child... and I love her

Chapter 4
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
May 22, 2013 06:37 AM

Wonderful, I do love your way with words. Thank you for sharing them.

 

FYI: one little catch, I think...The twinkle in her eye belied her shape words and tone.

i think it is suppose to be sharp not shape.



Author's Response:

thank you for catching that... no matter how many people look it over, there is always a 'miss'

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Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Apr 13, 2013 04:07 PM

It was nice to see this chapter from another point of view. Oh, and my favourite line in this one was... The mature passion burned brightly between them. Yep, liked that one.



Author's Response:

I wrote and re-wrote this chapter three or four times til I could get the feel right...

 

the line was an echo from the original story.. 'I always prefered mature passion over youthful lust'  Cougar says it to Larry

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Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Apr 13, 2013 04:03 PM

It's really nice to read a mature, sexual relationship, that's driven by love and devotion. OH, and it helps that you make the male lead so damn sexual... ha! I might want to do a banner for this one.



Author's Response:

banner.. ooh yes please... bats eyes at AnneM...

 

and glad Cougar is still hitting all the right notes

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Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Apr 10, 2013 07:47 PM

Beautiful story, beautifully told.



Author's Response:

thank you, there is more on its way



Author's Response:

thank you, there is more on its way

Chapter 3
Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Apr 10, 2013 03:44 PM

I like that we get to read Catherine's thoughts and feelings. From the outside looking in. I must admit my idea of rock & roll or hard rock performers is that of destroyed hotel rooms, drugs and sex. You have given me a different view. There is something so right and wonderful about Cougar, Torie and their extended family. The word that comes to mind is Utopia. I don't think many us get to have these kind of relationships with exes and step families. I love my step brothers and sisters, I don't even use the prefix, they are my brothers and sister but that's about it. It's a long story and not relevant. Love this very much! Thank you, I needed a little cheer after the shitty day I had.

Elena



Author's Response:

It's not Utopia, but Cougar is in his forties and has done the sex and drugs thing... part of the reason that Leanne and he have such a close relationship is that she isn't really an 'ex'.. they got drunk, fell into bed and wound up pregnant... then made it work from there for the boys' sake... Torie is who Leanne would have chosen for her best mate... she's just happy to see him so content

 

there is trouble coming, but only a little,,, it is a wedding after all....

 

 

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Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Apr 01, 2013 07:13 AM

Another baby, maybe? He wants it so badly it will break my heart if they can't get pregnant. Would he be too disappointed if his wish doesn't come true? These couple has become very dear to my heart. A 'real' woman for once at the centre of a romantic story. Thank you!

Elena



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review... this storry is all your fault anyway... lol

I don't know if they will get pregnant, but yes, he wants more kids...

 

and Torie is real... very real, in my head at least

Chapter 2
Reviewer: tytylili (Signed)
Mar 31, 2013 09:36 AM

This made me want to scream, "Wow!" You're a wonderfully expressive and descriptive writier, you know?



Author's Response:

thank you so very much....

Chapter 2
Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Mar 25, 2013 06:40 AM

Wonderful descriptions and depictions. Your writing is always so very visual for me to read, I enjoy that immensely. Thank you.



Author's Response:

you are more than welcome... and thank you for the review when you are feeling so lousy

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Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Mar 14, 2013 12:23 PM

This as all your stories are, is a marvelous transfer into a new world. I can see the smiles on their faces and the wonder of each thing. Thank you for continuing to share your obvious talent it is truly a blessing to read your stories.



Author's Response:

thnak you so much for the review...A part of me fell in love with Torie and Cougar's story when I wrote to short first one... and it begged to be continued....

Chapter 1
Reviewer: GryffindorWitch (Signed)
Mar 11, 2013 10:52 PM

Another great story.  I am glad you continued this.  I am anxious to see where this leads.

GW



Author's Response:

thank you, more as soon as cats and work allows

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Reviewer: AnneM (Signed)
Mar 11, 2013 11:28 AM

I really like the flow of this one. Don't get me wrong, because I mean this in a good way, but it felt sort of detached at first (I didn't feel detached, but the story did... and yet, detached isn't the right word I'm looking for... I wish I could express myself better.) But anyway, I think this will be one I'm looking forward to reading more. Love ya!



Author's Response:

It was what I was aiming for.. the professional detachment from Catherine who sees 150 brides a year

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Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed)
Mar 11, 2013 05:55 AM

I couldn't help myself when the email came in and had to read it. There is a method to my reading fics. From oldest to most recent but what the hell I'm home and chores can wait for a few minutes.

 

Torie is the luckiest woman on earth! It isn't because of the luxury of her wedding, the jewells or the hunk she is marrying but because she is so well and thoroughly loved. Love isn't perfect and I'm sure their marriage will have its ups and downs and with babies wrecking havoc even before they are born (tough pregnancies, lack of sleep, being hunted by the media, being away from home, etc) it is those imperfections and how they are dealt with that make the relationship stronger. Thank you for this gift. Can't wait until I can read your other stories (those in my queue) and maybe another installment of this one? Hugs.

 

Elena



Author's Response:

Torrie is lucky, but she's had a hard time of it before she met Cougar as you will find out later...she is totally adored by him and in return gives him what he needs

Chapter 1
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