I enjoyed this story, it was very entertaining. Thank you for sharing it.
Thanks. I tried to think of all the over-used descriptions of HG/SS I have run across and mashed them into this. I am glad you liked it.
Perfect!!! Exactly and utterly what I was looking for with this challenge. The sort of cringe-worthy mash of cliches is glorious. Brava, and grazie!
*grins*. Everytime I read about her squeaking, squealing, or her stomach grumbling I cringe (I am probably guilty of it, however). Her lip should be non-existant as well. And as much as I love Severus and wouldn't mind him showing me a trick or two in the sack, you gotta admit; how does a greasy, ugly, skinny, hooked-nosed guy become so well versed in the art of love-making? Oh, and I didn't put it in my story, but honestly; just how long are their tongues if they seem to be able to explore their ENTIRE mouths? Am I doing something wrong?
I am glad you enjoyed this and thanks for reading!!
Oh my, poor, clueless and oh-so-fickle Severus. All that running with Hermione impaled on him was certainly very stressful for his knees. ;)
But he is sex!god Severus and is very good at running around with Hermione impaled upon him. Or so I read! Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it!
what a story, seems that glass of wine helped as you were writing. (?)
Thank you for taking th challenge and posting the work that resulted.
Yes, that glass of wine did open my brain a bit...that and a naughty suggestion by hubby ;) Thanks for reading!
wonderful... I smiled all the way through
Thank you! I did quite a bit of giggling myself!