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Reviewer: Veronica K McCord (Signed)
Jan 28, 2019 09:02 AM
The high quality term papers first chapter is exceptionally instructive. I am really excited to know what happens next in upcoming chapters. I appreciate the content which you offer in your stories.
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Reviewer: One Red Shoe (Signed)
Apr 05, 2013 03:30 PM

I enjoyed this story, it was very entertaining. Thank you for sharing it.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I tried to think of all the over-used descriptions of HG/SS I have run across and mashed them into this.  I am glad you liked it.

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Reviewer: TycheSong (Signed)
Feb 25, 2013 11:37 PM

BWAHAHAHAAHA

Perfect!!! Exactly and utterly what I was looking for with this challenge. The sort of cringe-worthy mash of cliches is glorious. Brava, and grazie!

 



Author's Response:

*grins*.  Everytime I read about her squeaking, squealing, or her stomach grumbling I cringe (I am probably guilty of it, however).  Her lip should be non-existant as well.  And as much as I love Severus and wouldn't mind him showing me a trick or two in the sack, you gotta admit; how does a greasy, ugly, skinny, hooked-nosed guy become so well versed in the art of love-making?  Oh, and I didn't put it in my story, but honestly; just how long are their tongues if they seem to be able to explore their ENTIRE mouths?  Am I doing something wrong?

I am glad you enjoyed this and thanks for reading!!

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Reviewer: Savva (Signed)
Feb 23, 2013 10:57 PM

Oh my, poor, clueless and oh-so-fickle Severus. All that running with Hermione impaled on him was certainly very stressful for his knees. ;)

Excellent!



Author's Response:

But he is sex!god Severus and is very good at running around with Hermione impaled upon him.  Or so I read!  Thanks for reading.  Glad you enjoyed it!

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Reviewer: Quilter (Signed)
Feb 23, 2013 06:28 PM

what a story, seems that glass of wine helped as you were writing. (?)

Thank you for taking th challenge and posting the work that resulted.



Author's Response:

Yes, that glass of wine did open my brain a bit...that and a naughty suggestion by hubby ;)  Thanks for reading!

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Reviewer: jamies_lady (Signed)
Feb 23, 2013 02:12 PM

wonderful... I smiled all the way through



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I did quite a bit of giggling myself!

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