Reviewer: Quilter (Signed) · Date: Nov 30, 2012 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Two Turtledoves

sweet, subtle not so much really. But we love him any way! Thank you.

Reviewer: TycheSong (Signed) · Date: Sep 23, 2012 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Two Turtledoves

I'm not entirely sure why he would think he hasn't been made. The fact that er presents always coincide with his arrival/presence would be a dead give away. So cute that he thinks he's so clever.

I like that you made him a hypochondriac in this story. So funny!

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