I just finishedcreading this and loveseat.
I am a true fan of Hermione and her Slytherins
Can't swiftly read more of your fics
Ah..... the back garden. Interesting turn of develoopments
beautiful picture at the start of the chapter by the way/
LOL with the 'fake' memory
Blaise and Theo seem right for each other.
The next few chapters were my favorites. The grave yard scenes were so very good!
This was one of the first chapters where I felt like Theo really was special and I could see why she might pick him.
The first time I read this I was like. "SHE KILLED THE CAT?"
liked the flashback for their scene together, becuase I sort of didn't like Adrianin this, and I felt that she wouldn't sleep with him in her present prediciment, so I'm glad you had it as a flashback instead.
Well, it took two chapters for them to kiss and then it didn't go well, sort of like life, huh? And I can see how wizards might not know the beatles. I bet some Muggles don't know them.
no one ruffles the feathers of Hermione Granger more than Draco Malfoy and for that I'm pleased.
Blaise, blaise, Blaise, what are we to do with you?
was not at all in to the whole traingle of daphne, Marcus and hermione. It just seemed forced, and I suppose in the end you didn't really have it be a true 'trio' but still have tobe turthful here.
I thought Goyle was mean
Theo is a bit of a tortured soul, and rightly so.
Adrian is a dickhead, esxcuse my manners, but he is.
loved the interaction between them in this one. I really wanted you to get them together in the end, but then well Iwon't ruin it for everone else.
extremely funny chapter.
I couldn't see the 'connection' between Theo and her at first and even thought, excuse this critism, that it seemed a bit forced at first, but then after reading the entire thing, and then revisiting chapter after chapter to review, I get it. I truly do.
Blaise is like my favortie sort of cake. Chocolate sweet and a bit forbid. Love him so much.
Hail to the Dramione queen. I read all of this last night and this morning, and now I'll go through and review the chapters that stood out to me, ok?
I started to read this a year or so ago, and I even left reviews on another site, but I decided that since I was off work for the holiday, I would pick one long story of yours to read againl. This was it. I love this story. The set up was wonderful and the interaction of the Vipers is priceless.
Poor Adrian. That was a lovely story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It was intense and emotional, and all the characters were so unique and fully fleshed out. Thank you for writing & sharing!
I always loved these three. Their friendship is so different from what Hermione has with the Vipers. I bet their meeting was all kinds of fun.
Oooh, tough choices. This is some serious business.
A chpimunk is perfect. :) Just four items left, huh? And those are the hard ones.
Oh, I wonder what their plan is! So much suspense, these final chapters1
It's all unravelling. They better get their crap together and stop with all the secrets!
Goodness, they just ooze drama from their very skin, don't they?
So complicated! How ever wil they resolve all of this so that everyone can be at peace with it? Maybe they won't...
Harry! I'm glad to see Harry and his big ol scarhead! Lions are snakes working together - fills my heart with joy. ;) They'll figure this out. I know it! I'm too lazy to look back at the list, but if the last thing says something like "find a cure so she can live a long, happy live" then that one is golden.
HA... Harry and his big old scar head!!
Things are getting real all over the place. What a way to change some lives in a few short weeks.
Complications. And wasn't the last item something along the lines of living to old age - but how can she do that before she turns 27? That's some timeturner stuff right there.
P.S. I LOVE Professor McGonagall. She's my hero. (And so is Neville, because he rocked that that war.)
So the list is more important than everyone originally thought.
Did we know Draco was in love with Daphne? I don't remember. We certainly don't want him marrying the pug-faced jerk.
Promising. :) He calls her a liar quite often, doesn't he?
Still loving Draco, even if he does end up with pug-faced children (though I hope not!)
And, big night for Hermione and Theo...
I'm curious to find out what she's discovered!
Oh, no! He lied?! And he just assumed it would work because he wanted it to? I could punch him myself. Hopefully they find the answer in Malfoy's library.
Draco is inexplicable sometimes...
Enjoyed the moment of reflection with Hermione. I lost my mom to cancer when I was 22, so I can relate a bit to that. And it's nice that she recognizes the charms in her life even through all that was lost and painful with the war. But I suppose suffering and loss makes you appreciate all the good things that much more.
I lost my mother in my twenties also. When I look at my daughter and nieces, who are now around that age, I wonder how I managed to go on, because they seem so young to me. It's true, as you said though, that suffering and losing people make you appreciate what you have.
I do wonder how the Theo-Hermione-Blaise triangel will work out. And I feel sorry for Draco. Somehow I think it would be hardest for him of them all to find true love. But they're all very mature about this, about relationships.
Nice moment between the two of them.
I wonder if she loves five rather than two if it nullifies the anti-curse? She has to pick two and only two! Haha.
That's all of them now, isn't it? Unofficial initiation complete? ;)
It's nice that they're all just out there with things. It's like Hermione has swept in and made everyone want to share their feelings like they're all in a twisted Slytherin support group.
This story is so good, so full. I'm completely invested.
Poor Adrian - he just wants to make everything okay. These are true friends, these Slytherin boys, just like the golden trio.
Draco makes me laugh - again with the Twilight! Lol.
All the bromance is making me all gushy inside. :)
Of course Draco's a Twilight fan - haha.
Fun little interlude. All those purebloods going on and on about muggle pop culture. :)
IT is very scary. Even as a bad B movie, it scared the crap out of me. I've seen most of the movie adaptions but haven't been able to get through King's books. His writing style does not jive with my reading style. It's a shame, too, because the stories are interesting. But what sold me on IT - Tim Curry as Pennywise! So freakin' awesome!
When that came out, I hadn't read the book, but I loved that mini series, even if I was shocked as hell when I found out 'it' was a spider at the end!
Draco's speech about the clowns - lol! I love him. I really do.
Poor Blaise, I love getting these snippets into what has made them into the men they've become.
I can forgive you now. :)
I have to say it again - I love Draco Malfoy! I really do. He tries to make it hard to love him, but it's really very easy.
You gave us false reassurances about the kitten! I don't know if I can forgive you.
I love enmeshed Draco for all his faults and hidden lovely bits.
Oh, no, the kitten! And sorry to hear about your cat. That's always a very hard thing.
That being afraid thing Hermione was talking about - one of the many joys of growing up, which doesn't seem fair. You feel so invincible when you're a kid. It doesn't last for long.
Great chapter! I was wondering about the their history. I was totally sucked into the flashback. I'm sad for everybody!
But a surefire cure for sadness must be being mad a Blaise for not keeping secrets!
Blaise! How could you do that! Shame on you!
And I have to say that I adore Draco. He's such an ass, but there's just something about him that you can't help but love.
Oh, good for him! I'm glad he got over himself and kissed that girl! Hmmm...but what will the repercussions be?
Oh, and there it is! Eek!
I wish Theo would make a move! He's being decidedly unSlytherin. ;)
Hermione's all full of love for these Slytherin boys. ;)
Such a different world she's stumbled into from Potterworld. ;) I'm enjoying your take on the characters as "grown-ups." Such interesting people!
Oh, goodness. What a thing to spring on a girl. They just assume she's going to agree to all their sexcapades, don't they? I guess we'll she if she does...
Oooh, if I were Hermione Granger and they kept calling me "little girl" or little anything...nobody would be happy. Those Slytherin boys are so condescending. Nice job on writing a drunk Hermione! That's hard to do well!
I have to ask - why the Beatles? :)
I love the Beatles and I knew they had plenty of songs for this long story and all its titles!
Serious business. We all want answers. ;)
I feel sad for Blaise. That's got to be difficult. But I suppose you can find comfort in surprising places. I wonder about Hermione's history with Adrian.
Gasp! Of course he would ask. I'm sure she's more obvious than she thinks she is. Really enjoying this story so far. All the characters have such life!
I enjoyed this chapter! What a lovely morning! And fantastic interpretation of the list item. I really like that Draco paints. And I have to wonder if all the boys will have a different name for the kitten. :)
So that's what Draco picked - I had forgotten that one!
This was a nice scene. You do such a nice job writing these boys with all of their personality quirks.
Draco is such a whiney prat, but I want to know what he picked! And the list stealing mystery is revealed!
Interesting, interesting. I love all Hermione's little quirks. A blank piece of paper is very useful! And a curious little flirtation going on there between Theo & Hermione.
Oh, well, he's awfully forward, isn't he? Though, if I were Hermione, or anyone, really, and I only had six months to live...
The plot thickens! I feel like there are clues scattered through this whole chapter, but I'm much to sleepy to try to sort it all out. I'm enjoying the mystery!
Ooooh...ominous in a nonthreatening sort of way. Obviously a Slytherin loking for mischief. Interesting list. Let's see how she does...
One list to rule them all! I'm also very fond of lists. :)
Interesting premise with the curse. I'm excited to find out what's on her list!
Great story! Please update soon.
Brilliant as usual! Very unique!! Can't wait to read more!!!
Thanks for reading!
:) great chapter!
Thanks for reviewing this story!!!
Great chapter. Who found the list?
Woot! One of my all time AnneM favorites! So glad this is being posted here!!! :-)
I love #14, that would be humorous! I'm thinking it was either Blaise or Draco that was in Hermione's new flat and found the list.
Bring the snakes lol