I've read this story over and over again, especially the second week.
but I still don't get it, how could Hermione forgive Draco at the end? how could she take him back at the end?
she should kick him, or hex, or anything to make draco regret for ruining their wedding. i still don't get it.
Hmph, I just wonder how t o write it..well you are one of my TOP favorite authors and for example Pink Roses or Perfect match I totaly love. You know I review regularly and honestly so please I mean no offense.
But time to time you wrote story (well generally Week in the life series ) which seems not like from you, like this one. ITo me its as bunch of people wrote it in chaotic way after huge alkoholic party, each of them write part of the chapter and just mixed up. I dont now its that your intention or not but to me this is like crazy teenagers story. In almost every chapter they fight like stupid, for comical reasons, behave in loony way. Its never ending fight of people who dont want to be together and dont know how to split up. sorry If I disapoint you but I want to let you know my opinion about this style of stories several times but never do that until today.
It's fine if you don't like this story, or the other ones in the series, although I happen to think the fourth one is one of my best stories. Keep in mind, the first one of this series is the first Fanfiction story I ever wrote, so of course, it may be a bit rocky in some spots. And I don't like every story written by my favourite writers and they profesionals, so I know people won't like everything I do. Sometimes I'm not really happy with everything I do. And of course, I would like to think I've gotten better at writing as the years have progressed. Thank you anyway!
This was like the start of YOUR particular Hermione and Draco and I've come to expect a certain THING from them, you know?
Love the humour and pathos (spelling may be wrong) in this particular story. I forgot all about this story. I love re-reading it again. I think I liked the fourth one the best, and this one second best of the series.